|Reviews for One World|
| Guest chapter 24 . 3/13
This is a great story. One thing I wonder about is when you will show more of Harry defending Hermione from the type of bullying seeming to occur in this chapter, as he appeared a bit more quiet than expected based on his personality and their closeness, though of course Hermione should not become a damsel in distress type of figure always needing Harry to fight her battles, and the social situation settling in with new people can be complex. Anyway, it will be interesting to see the clubs, including at least a snippet of clubs that Harry and Hermione are not a part of.
| Silverstargirl chapter 25 . 3/1
Great story! I find your approach to be quite refreshing and look forward to reading more.
| syed chapter 25 . 2/27
If Lily was writing James in hearts this makes it makes it sound like the notebook is from the end of her schooling, but during her OWLS is when she and severus stopped being friends. If this book is from later, how did it end up with Snape? Its possible she left it at school, or snape found it somewhere.
Also, since the HBP potion book was Eileen's, it stands to reason as a potion enthusiast, he started to use that book far earlier than 6th year, so his annotations would extend to years earlier, and upon which he used to expand the prince grimmoire. They also might have been made with assistance from lily, so Severus may loan the book to harry if he show potential in potions, so the knowledge that lily contributed is passed to her son. Also, since it is said to contain alchemy materal, it would be useful for the flamel clubs.
The Maruaders created the map to create a sort of legacy, so it stands to reason, they might have written their own tome of secret, or just used the map it self. TO record pranks, and the magic involved in making them possible. It would simply be another way for the four to brag about their exploits. THe twins would be eager to add to such a legacy, so alot of the pranks they have carried out, combined with research which they are basing their products on.
ALbus and Gelbert wanted to push back the boundaries of magic, so to do it, they would need a record, so they might have potentially started a joint grimmoire. Also, after he was defeated, who got his books and materials. He did take the elder wand, to ensure no one else knew about it, he had to inspect those tomes at least, to find how much he had learned of the wand, and the other hallows.
I was thinking about what makes the deathly hollows so unique/powerful. Combined they are far more powerful than apart. I doubt they can be seperated once they are reunited, most likely tied to the potter bloodline from then on. Due to their power and age, I am betting that when combined, the hallows are aware, potentially even sentient, but even seperate, they are more than just objects.
For the wand I see it having the power of the metamagic rods, as well as negation, cancelation and absorbtion. Also, as it is meant for batle, I see it having the weapon special ability, for both mele and ranged weapons. So magic cast by the wand would carry those effects. We know wands have a unique view in potter land. Like how Harry wand was always better than toms, I wonder if that effect is easy to replicate with the elder wand. So this wand learns from the wands that it fights, encounters or goes near. That way the wand stays the best no matter what.
The cloak would have the special abilities of armor and shields, that is basicly very defensible , with a few very useful abilities. We know oils can be placed on armor, so I wonder if used on the cloak, the effect can be made permanent. Since the cloak is said to belong to death, while the other two were mad, makes it unique. I kinda wonder if it could potentially give harry divine magic, or make him a paladin.
I wonder if the other tales in the book are potentially real, in some form. The magical cauldron sounds awesome. the glass casket could potentially help with the horocrux and the garden seems like a nice place to visit.
We know that lily experimented with the patronus, would harry consider expanding on it, using different emotions, and conditional commands to see what effect is produced. It is a guardian and messenger, I was thinking, it could allow for 2 way communication, or help to spy an area. The anger one, I hope can harm dementors. I always thought that the patronus while useless against most magic, would mess with dark magic, so able to blockintercept/absorb dark arts magic. I could see it being used against the unforgivable and the horocrux, they are so dark, that a patronus cant help to react to it. The patronus was the only light art taught, so it could be used to fight dark arts.
I hope the school continue to get improvement due to the money. There herbology and creature facilities are expanded, so some ranching and arming. It lets the school increase it's continual income, and provide more resources for the school. A planatarium eould be useful to ensure continual teaching even in bad weather. boating facilities for the lake. enouraging other sporting equipment. I always liked the idea of a junior school for those too young to get a wand, plenty of non wand material to practise, so sort of readying them for magic and wands. They would allow all the kids to be a bit more advanced in some ares. A summer school/camp, could be very useful, a way to encourage community and allow kids to achieve more. instead of simply lazing around, kids can go to games and sports to see friends and have fun. they can also do non normal magic in their spare time. The librrary expanded to meet the specification of modern libraries, they could purchase a non fiction library suitable to a college or university level, while buying ever second hand book they can to fill the fiction collection. They might have to build an entire new library in another room. Also, since they are kids a comic collection.
A school paper and/or radio statiion, would be a great activity, and allow alumni and parents to hear about school happenings. There could be valuable place for classifieds and adverts. a tuck/school supply shop, schools can sell alsort of things.
We know the prime minister has a way to contact the MOM, ask the painting in the room. So why not simply create a report detailing every breech of the statue of secrecy, and use that to force them to reveal what each occasion was, and how they put everything right. Imagine i it is released to the press or the international body of wizards. We know the queen has a wizard, that suggests she has some authority/power so she can use that. Before that, they arrange for every wizard and squib in the armed forces to form a special operation unit, and recruit from the WW.
| squidbert chapter 23 . 2/16
Excellent story. I have enjoyed it greatly.
| Beth5572 chapter 25 . 2/15
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. I hope you keep up your great work.
| mbahgila21 chapter 25 . 2/12
i love this... this is EPIC...
i hope u update soon... :D
| mellra chapter 25 . 2/11
I have to say, I'm really impressed by your work with Harry Potter! That's saying something coming from me because there's only about a handful of HP fanfiction that I wholeheartedly enjoy. Its nothing against the other authors, its just I think HP is so good as it is, why improve? You however, have proven me wrong.
I am having a great time reading your HP stories and I hope to see more of this, as well as a sequel to "The Son of Prongs and the Snitch and Stone"! Keep up the awsome work!
| murgel chapter 25 . 2/11
quite an intriguing story you are doing here, I really like it.
The characters feel right and very believable
| plimplamploum chapter 25 . 2/10
Congratulation for that story : I guess it's going to be a veeery long one, but if you manage to keep going, I'd say it's worth it.
I can't wait for the next chapter !
| sabrina-luna-potter chapter 25 . 2/7
Awesome! You're a wonderful author! I would love to read some of your published works.
| I Love Ginevra chapter 9 . 2/6
BOOO PUDDLEMERE! lol
| Eccentric Harmony chapter 3 . 2/6
I'm really loving this piece of work so far! I've always wondered what it would be like if Harry was raised alongside Hermione instead of at the Dursley's. I'm so happy Sirius isn't in Azkaban, and this clearly changes their third year! I wonder what will happen then.
I was reading your note in chapter two and honestly, as much as I hate Hermione and Harry not being friendly with Ron, I can see it in this circumstance. After all, we saw it a bit in Ron's perspective when Harry was with Ginny at the beginning. He was pissed, and then Harry hurt his little sister and Ron reacted accordingly... just like any brother would, regardless of being older or younger.
I notice Hermione's wand sparked gold and blue, does this mean she will be in Ravenclaw? Though I think you did say she would be in Gryffindor, or maybe you were raving abut the books? It's a bit confusing, but I understand how you get really passionate about something so unique like this story and you just go on. It's really your story, and we're just here to enjoy it.
Onto the next chapter. :D
| I Love Ginevra chapter 2 . 2/6
I'm glad you're keeping the pairings canon! I'm a Hinny (Harry/Ginny) shipper and while the other characters date others I don't like any one other than Harry with Ginny and vice versa... Haven't since I read PoA! Also, I agree with you... Having Harry and Hermione together after being brother and sister for a decade is just... YUCKY! lol
| lavanyalabelle chapter 25 . 2/5
| Flying Chrissy chapter 25 . 2/3
Cool story! Look forward to the next update.