Reviews for Moments on Pre-Konoha
Nehayat chapter 3 . 2/24/2013
Poor Madara. If there was someone he really loved was her brother. But he lost the opportunity to have a new family in Konoha, indulging in so much hate. BTW, great chapter!
Madara74 chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Hehe, stone skipping, we all love to throw pebbles into the water XD

Izuna didn't deserve to die :( Oh well, great chapter, too bad it was small
crazyuser chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
gostei muito! mais foi muito pequeno esse capĂ­tulo :[ imaginei o madara do manga, criancinha linda! haha ha bjs
Cavallo Alato chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Very nice, you got Madara quite well!
wisdom-jewel chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Pretty good and enjoyable. It gives good insight into Madara's character. I hope you continue with this story.
crazyuser chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
Nehayat chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Haha! Team Tobirama reminds me of Team Kakashi. Looooove HashiramaxMito. But you know it very well. Very good, continue!
Cavallo Alato chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Oh Hashi, this was so cute. I love HashiMito
Cavallo Alato chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
It's good so far! Tobirama IS a boss.
Just a random comment: If Hiruzen's in a water prison, how is he talking?
wisdom-jewel chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
What a sweet chapter. I hope you do more soon
wisdom-jewel chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I really don't spot major mistakes I could see though I'm sure someone will spot something I miss. The story is pretty good and I would like to see more.