Reviews for Golden Blooded (SasuSaku)
Emrys315 chapter 1 . 10/25/2018
Umm... Your into thing needs work. I can't read this if your intro needs a beta.
miss ASSASSIN MASTER chapter 2 . 11/11/2016
boi u need to fix these grammer mistakes like i love this fanfic but damn this mispelled words are killing me
Sapphire love chapter 39 . 7/17/2015
It was a fantastic story, one of the best I've read, I don't know why it does t have many reviews
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 5 . 3/13/2015
a little details would help , well written anyways
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 3 . 3/13/2015
i seriously like this concept of a stronger and non-fangirl sakura but i think u should repair this chapter a bit .it has some grammer errors . otherwise , i love the story till now
The Blaze of Hestia chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
well written
Guest chapter 28 . 2/15/2015
KawaiNekoSamaSanChan chapter 14 . 12/2/2013
Im not saying you stroy sucks but is rather good! Athough it could use some improvment it has some great potential! One tip of advice, I myself haven't written a story yet but will soon. I have read many stories, some great, others not so much. Im not judging or any thing just a little constructive criticism, instead of just telling us whats going on in the seens you created put a little more detail into it. Like telling us what their saying,thinking,observing stuff like that. This should draw your readers in more thus creating a positive image of your story also, giving you further experience in future stories! Thats about it! All in all, Amazing story has lots of potential! Keep it up!
Guest chapter 16 . 9/3/2013
nia annie chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
You must focus on grammar , the spelling and such . If you don't know the spelling , just inform me and look it up in the dictionary .
FairiesDescent chapter 31 . 6/28/2013
Dr. Suess XD the last quote ahahahaha perfect.
FairiesDescent chapter 26 . 6/28/2013
Your writing is much better than before! Aside from confusing words that are homophones, it makes much more sense!
FairiesDescent chapter 12 . 6/28/2013
you do have grammar problems but all you need is a beta. Plus, it has improved drastically since the first chapters. Don't worry about it too much.
JJGre19kakashi chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
I loved it all
pierce-the-soul-867 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
i love this story i read it before and i just had to look for it again, it took me like a year to find it though im soooo happy now!
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