|Reviews for Spread your wings|
| Malisuco chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Why is Jacob not interested in Bella? I don't get that part.
And Bella x Alice pairing should be the CONCLUSION not something that starts from just 4-5 chapters in. I think that would make the story much better, but your choice.
Glad to see Bella isn't a pushover, by the way.
| Fat ppl are harder to kidnap chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
is she a dragon or fallen
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Interesting definetly want to read more
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Why does she have to be so chummy with the mutts?
| grandma406 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I find this twist very interesting...please continue...
| MoonlitGroundedAngel chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Wow I really like the start to this story! :) Alice and Bella are my favorite twilight couple so finding this made my day. First I really like how ur taking the relationship slow and starting off with Bella not being so open and nice with Alice and the Cullens. And the part with Jacob coming to pick her up, I thought that was really clever, and I thought, good way to piss off the Cullens and cause of tension for when they see Bella again. Oh and I was just wondering are u going to be only writing in Alice's POV or are u also going to write from bella's perpective? Anyways really enjoyed this first chapter and I can't wait to read more! :)
| Crazy Heart 101 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
I like your story :)
| yuri barq chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
interesting... bella is sooo beautiful in your cover..I hope you update soon :)
| DeJee chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
i kinda like it is bella old?
| elfspirit7 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Awesome! Please update ASAP!
| Sylverlyf chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
They were so childish most of the time. Then again I'm a hundred year old vampire stuck in a teenagers body. I guess I cant complain too much. The teenage hormones affect me as much as they do them.- yeah i always aassumed the samr thing
| elliehandesu chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
NICE! eager here lmao more!