|Reviews for My Brothers|
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/12
porque no actualizas me desespero
| Nubia Perez 3 chapter 4 . 12/30/2016
When the next chapter is ready?
I do not want to look rude but I'm dying to read Chapter Five
I would also love to have ready in chapter where ichigo completely surrenders to his brothers (if you understand me )
I must say that this is the story that has most fallen in love hurts the next chapter
Your way of writing is beautiful and the story that you create is even more I look forward to the following chapters
By the way my native language is Spanish so this tube to write it with a translator for my terribre English I'm sorry if the wording is confusing
| Kisuke894 chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
Isn't this from the manga
| alicia.jen.havens chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Wished you had finished this.
| Jamee chapter 3 . 10/6/2016
I forgot to tell you in my last review that if you're having a hard time continuing the story. I could help you with ideas if you would be willing to let Me help! I have a lot of ideas! I hope you respond to this review!
| JayJayAnimeLover2000 chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
Hi I know it may be a while when you reply so I thought I would pay down one of my ideas for ya. How about that you add two characters farther along in the story? They would be Ichiru and Mugestsu. They come from a doujinshi on YouTube called Lollipop Carnival and I think it would really help you out with the story and inspire you to write more!
| JayJayAnimeLover2000 chapter 2 . 10/6/2016
Well I realize that maybe since it'll be a while that you respond I tell you some ideas. I know that your story is about this doujinshi of Ichigo with the three brothers. Solo what if farther along you add Ichiru and Mugestu? They come a doujinshi on YouTube called Lollipop Carnvial! You should look it up! Tell me what you think of it!
| JayJayAnimeLover2000 chapter 3 . 10/6/2016
Hi there! I wanted to say that I absolutely adore your story and I wish you would continue it more! I know that it said you were on hiatus but if you're having a hard time coming up with chapters, I could help you and give ideas! I'm really good at ideas when I'm passionate about something and I really don't want this story to end after chapter 4. If you're willing to let Me help please respond to my text! Your story is just too good to end!
| Jamee chapter 4 . 10/4/2016
Please continue this story I love it!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/2/2016
porque no la continuas?
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2016
pero porque mierda no la continuas esta increíble la historia
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/2/2016
podrias continuarla porfabor es muy buena la historia
| EmelieLovette17 chapter 4 . 11/17/2015
I so want this to be continued.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
i love this story please continue
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/11/2015
Kya! So cuuuuute... I love this!