Reviews for 4 Times Pitch Teased Jack, and 1 Time he Finished the Job
VanillaSlash chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
Holy shit, this last chapter though! Very hot.
Alva chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
This was just too hot! I'm jelaous of the guard who got to watch Pitch aand Jack all along, he was really lucky! And who would not get fricking insane with arousal if seeing them go at it like that! *trying to take deep breaths* Okay, I just love those two and yes, this story needs another chapter!
YaoiKawaii224 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
You should make another chapter. PLEASE. I love this two shot...
Asexual-Sex-Worker chapter 2 . 4/7/2014
Oh my god I don't know if this is finished or not but it sure as hell needs another chapter! I love it!
ChucklingDevil chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
Very interesting take on things.
I feel sorry for Suit. The poor bloke must be so embarrassed.
Akuma no Bara chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I feel more perverted than usual... Pitch corrupted Jack! He's joined the dark side!
Hades-Bitch chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
love it giggling and cheeks turning red
Born2Ship chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Shadow tentacle porn FTW!
Halloween265 chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
LMAO this had me laughing the entire time. I love the whole video thing xD
The Lady Geek chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
I'm pretty sure this should be rated M.
Raver's Spirit chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
O/O. O-oh dear GAWD! I-I-I don't even...we-well. That was enjoyable. O/O. I'm gonna sound like a perv now but...will you make another one...pleeeeaaaseee? Whew, could kill a girl what with the major nosebleeds this must have caused. *while holding a wad of tissues to said nosebleed* good job, good job. Maybe you should make one with them going at it and the other guardians walk in, now wouldn't THAT be interesting!
Storm-Maiden-Lucania chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
This officially made me blush. I never blush! I actually had to stop reading a few times because the sexyness was overwhelming. Good job!
nightmre13 chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Hah the security guy just got free porn off of jack and pitch nice _
I hope you post another chapter soon
Mystery chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Wow OH wow... that was unexpected... excuse me *walks to corner*… (laughs head off, falls on floor,dies laughing) XD
LaBlanc chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
/dies laughing