Reviews for The Harbinger's Quest (CC1)
LordAdamant chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
I think you did very well with this. The only issues I found were grammatical errors that could be easily fixed with a spell check program and a third party to proofread it. The story itself is really cool. I personally find that first person stories offer peculiar insight into stories. It helps the reader to connect. And for someone who doesn't usually write first person, you did a great job.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Please finish! It's worth reading
Artifex chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
I agree. Instant promotion. :)
solomon.leo.7 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Got to work a bit on your grammar and use of commas besides that, it seems decent