Reviews for Strings of Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, another neat section, and it looks like Harry is moving along nicely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting to see how things could have gone with a fairer less fairy tale version of evil stepparent a that we got in canon, and will look forward to how the school goes especially as this Harry seems to be making more connections. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I might be going to Eaton!" - The correct spelling of that school is "Eton". "Sister's tell each other everything." - "Sisters tell each other". |
![]() ![]() Outstanding beginning! What house will Harry go into? Will we be seeing Harry taking charge of more then just his life but the wizarding world as a whole? |
![]() ![]() ![]() a really interesting start... love that there is no Vernon Dursley around... eagerly awaiting to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! You've laid out a number of very interesting premises (no Vernon, loving family, smart Petunia, close Evans sisters, probably sane Sirius, close contacts within the wizarding world, just to name a few). There's also potential for some wonderful Harry capabilities (just to start, being politically savvy). I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() Interesting. Sorry not much to say but I look forward to seeing where you take this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice first chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmm, a nice start. It is always nice to see a sane Dursley, um Evans. Alan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like a nice start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No more Vernon. Hell yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates |