|Reviews for To Build a Family|
| Alessia chapter 8 . 3/15
This story is sooo good. I simply love it! You should never write things like "this chapter is too long, I don't know why because there's not much going on in it". That's absolutely not true. Don't ever try to cut your work. We want every words you can give us. And it's so great. Keep up your good work!
| snailshell chapter 15 . 3/12
please keep on writing. You are far from beeing unoriginal. I just started recently reading your stories. You have developed your writing skills compared to the first Chapter of TBAH so much. During the first chapters I sometimes thought - well this might be a little out of character - but that stopped. You've done a great job. I had to laugh loud when Mike is doing his puppy-stuff and Harvey just rolls his eyes.
We (Ok, I - since I just can speak from myself) need to know many more things about these two. What incident is Paul referring to at Mikes Bithday Party? How about charming the girls? Do they keep living together? Will they move apart? (Well, if so - how far?) How was the graduation? Harvey must have been a proud Dad. And I bet Donna was there as well. How was their first case together? Did they share each other strenghths?
You created a hole universe with the private Harvey! And I could still imagine Gabriel Macht acting in your storys.
Thank you for all of your work. You did an incessantly great job.
(So this was my first review ;-) )
| Coleegirl chapter 15 . 3/11
Okay so I don't normally post reviews but I just want you to know that you are an amazing writer and I love what you do with these characters. I can't wait to see a new chapter :)
| ilovecrimedramas chapter 1 . 3/8
I think a good way to end this story is a fluffy chapter about Harvey becoming a grandparent, keep up the awesome kidnapping drama!
| vidz chapter 9 . 3/8
Really good chapter...one of the best in this series.
Although, shouldn't Harvey have bought Mike a car by now. Given the disdain Harvey shows to Mike's mode of transportation to office on the show, it doesn't seem likely that he'll allow his own son to turn up like that. Maybe there can be a back story about Mike crashing a car and Harvey not trusting him with it or Mike being too scared to drive because of his parents' accident or something.
| mlt17 chapter 15 . 3/6
OMG, I need to know what happens! I'm loving this collection of stories!
| reader82 chapter 15 . 3/5
Hopefully Harvey turns up really soon. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
| Marie Twinchester chapter 15 . 3/4
We still don't know how it all turns out? Can't wait to see the fallout. Thanks for the update.
| ilovecrimedramas chapter 15 . 3/3
You are such an amazing writer! So sad this story is ending, but excited to read the last bit! This and tbah are by far my favorite suits fics :)
| Sakimi1014 chapter 15 . 3/3
Ahhhh! I'm dying with suspense! Please update soon!
| Lizzie chapter 15 . 3/3
Thanks for the update!
| lor4eto chapter 15 . 3/3
Loved it! Update the third chapter soon.
| iruma ackleschia chapter 15 . 3/3
whoaa... I think my face went like these; :D you're updating! :) more chappy to go! -_- one more part :( story complete
omg! my fave suits ficts is going to be end! *sulking*
well, I owe you sooooooo damn much, cz your translated tbah n tbaf got great reviews from the readers.
just remember that I will always waiting for your other writing, take care!
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/26
NEED MORE NEED MORE! Why are you such a great author? This story is flawless, I want it to go on forever!
| Artic Dragon chapter 14 . 2/25
I've always enjoyed reading your suits fanfiction. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next so please please please update asap please?