Reviews for Cut Open My Sternum(And Pull My Little Ribs Around You)
Jada.T chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
I know I'm late to the game but this is the most lovely of all stories. I read the other one in the same universe. I don't think you are actively writing but if you ever wanted an idea you could do another one from this series. It is such an interesting setting and their characters are well done. Major Kudo points to you! chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
I just love your writing! This story isn't heavy with unnecessary descriptions, but you give us the details that matter. It fits well with the pacing and I love that I can let my imagination take over. Still, the dialogue comes so easily between the characters and I liked the Sci-fi/Romance balance. Loved Pete in this one too!
Lazy Penman chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Purity Ring - Fineshrine. Love it.
Moxain chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I love this. I love Battlestar Galactica. I love Warehouse 13. This is great.
Jolly is a dick though.
Chance chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Honestly, I read amazing stories then every time I scroll up to see the writer I just see Journaliar.

Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Beautiful story as usual!
xom chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Repeating my love of this AU, I just wanted to pipe in that I also thoroughly enjoyed Helo's cameo appearance and callsign contribution. He was probably my favorite character in the BSG series and I hope you continue this far enough for him to appear again. Myka vs Jolly was badass and I'm still crossing my fingers that HG's "invincibility" against the stomach virus was more figurative than literal...
alwaysjisbon-bw chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Holy. Frakking. Crap. That was, it was, I, I have no words. It left me speechless. It was, perfect! I don't even know what to say... I'm almost in tears because it was so beautiful
Martini42at6 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
I have found my new favorite AU. Thank you for the story. I really enjoyed the depth of the characters and how well you integrated lust and play into their lives.
shan-nins chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I want to give you gifts, to allure you and thank you into writing more stories. It's sick how talented you are, sick and awesome.
Iwritetofindmyway chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Holy frak this is an amazing story, this is the crossover I never knew that I wanted. And God damn they're so hot together, you captured their fiestiness really well, though in some parts the transition into different scenes was a little difficult, but the wany it flowed between them with no real distinction was quite nice, so whether that was accidental or not, it was a nice touch, it made it feel kind of like a dream sequence.

I enjoyed this peice of fiction quite a bit, if you choose to do more, I'll be watching out for them.
They-Call-Me-Orange chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Well, damn. I hope you're proud of yourself, now I have to commit a decent chunk of my life to four seasons of Battlestar Galactica. And then probably Caprica. And the webseries they made. And then to catching up on all the fics you write in this verse.

When all of my friends abandon me because I refuse to hang out so I can stay at home and watch sci fi shows, it's gonna be all your fault.

Knowing next to nothing about BSG, there were some obvious gaps in my knowledge here. For all I know it was threaded with carefully placed considerations for fans of the show, that went right over my head. However, the story itself was very easy to follow, and compelling despite my lack of background knowledge.

The dynamic you established between Helena and Myka here was incredible. The element of hero worship that Myka only got to dip her toe into on WH13 is more fully realized here. It served to establish HG's prowess and role in the verse, while also creating a really satisfying arc for their relationship. Myka starts off a little bit unsure, but she doesn't let it undercut her. She's good at what she does, capable, dedicated, and not about to let herself be intimidated into forgetting that. It felt very true to the character. And HG was just the right amount of charming asshole.

I loved the hints of backstory you dropped in here. I'm sure the details were left out for the sake of brevity (I admire your ability not to get lost in tangents, I struggle with that a lot) but I'm dying to know the specifics of Sam and Christina's fates here. Was it something you included in the other story? If it's not show-breakingly spoilery you have to share with me sometime.

The only problem I really found here was that sometimes the transitions between scenes were a bit unclear, though I suspect that's ff dot net's crappy formatting system's fault. The only suggestion I could have made is that I would have liked to see more bro-times with Pete. But, that's my suggestion for basically any fic because I love the shit out of their friendship.

I really liked this one. I can't wait to catch up so I can explore this verse more fully.

QuimbyCub chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Lovely, thank you for sharing.
alienqueen chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
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You write brilliantly and this is a genius AU. Really hope you'll write some more...
Deserva chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Honestly, I had no idea what to think of this story when I saw the title. I did not recognize it at all. But golly gee, my fear friend, I am so freaking glad I read it.
This is amazing work. I am absolutely enthrall end and, pardon me if I am being greedy, expecting more of this delectable story. You are doing amazing work and I am dying for more.

The only thing I can recommend is a little bit more of a transitionary signal when progressing to different scenes. That is literally it. Great job.
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