|Reviews for Troublesome Discoveries|
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/27
Just found the story and quite enjoying it.
Thank you for the enjoyable story 3
| suliganagongorova chapter 8 . 2/27
Very interesting. I look forward to continuing your work. I really want to know what will happen next?
| Iddle chapter 2 . 10/8/2022
First, I want to state I’m not a professional reviewer, nor some acclaimed author, so take my words with a grain of salt.
To be honest, coming to this story after seeing so many positive reviews and amount of favorites, I was expecting something amazing. And while I will admit, that grammar wise it’s good for the standards of fanfiction, discounting some weird breaks in from the author I assume, and the story, however cliched, is executed decently so far, which is not saying much as I write this review after reading just one and a half chapter, I can’t bring myself to read further.
My main problem is the main character’s new gender. It seems pointless. The author stated that it will have no bearing on the story from the romance standpoint, so there’s that. There is some exploration of body and gender identity issues, ok sure, I will happily read it. What annoys me is that he could as well be male for all the impact it has on the story. His family doesn’t even react to the fact their little sister/daughter cut her hair, changed her personality, and seemingly decided to become male overnight. A lot of time is spent on his issues with his new gender yet in the end it all amount to almost nothing.
The second thing, wasn’t he a twenty-six years old mafia boss? Why is he acting like a young teen going through puberty? I know that in his world mafia is pretty softcore but still, he probably had a girlfriend by the time he died, killed people, or at least gave orders to do so. Stop blushing from seeing your own body for Christ’s sake!
| Ann chapter 8 . 10/4/2022
I came here bc of your stories on AO3
Actual illegal cliffhanger. Had too much fun reading this one that when I reached the last chapter I had to take a minute and scream at my pillow. Tsuna what are you going to do?! Ahhhhh
Thank you really for the hard work! Take care!
| Zaidee Lighthart chapter 8 . 4/9/2022
Noooo! Worst timing…! If there was just one more chapter… Well honestly I’d like to read more then one more chapter about how he will explain himself to Reborn. But I really hate cliff hangers….. Especially when the story hasn’t been updated in a few years. I hardly ever enjoy Twin stories in hitman reborn, but I was really enjoying this. Maybe one day I’ll be lucky enough to be able to read that ninth chapter about how he explains is death and waking up in the body of a 10 year old girl version of himself. I really want to see how Reborn takes learning about the future that was and maybe he can be happy to know that it was himself who trained Tsuna in that other life. Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us. I really hope I can read that ninth chapter one day.
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2022
| CaliArena chapter 8 . 11/22/2021
I just wanted to tell you first that I find Tsuna struggles with gender very real. It pains me every time that someone refers to him as a girl when he is not comfortable with that. I hope when he finally opens up, he'll get the support and help he needs!
Thank you so much for sharing this lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. I love Tsuna, and Hiro and the rest of the cast, and how Tsuna connects with them in different ways than before. I'm in for more platonic relationships! Friendships are so important and in a world with flames and harmony they could be so meaningful! And the new possibilities! Canon!Tsuna made a lot of connections but he could make even more friends now that he's more mature! I like romantic relationships too, don't get me wrong. Either way I'll love wherever you go with that!
I hope you are doing great wherever you are in the world! Kudos ️ Kudos ️ Kudos ️
| PrincessMagic chapter 8 . 10/17/2021
Or, EXTREME, i guess you could say! XD
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2021
I love your idea here and I also love this story! I quite like the character of Tsuna here as well as his portrayal. I hope you continue this, and thanks for writing this! 333
| kimchisdelicious chapter 8 . 8/2/2021
sheeeshh im itching to know what happens next kahskahsjsh i love the story btw, thank you!
| NATASHAMAY chapter 8 . 6/24/2021
Is so beautiful ️️
| stabilo01 chapter 8 . 5/9/2021
wh̶͇͎̓y̸̙͐̎ ̶̪́̒a̶̘͆͌r̸̭͗é̸̺̓ṉ̸́̚t̸̽͜ ̷͚͍͛̀t̶̙̿͝ͅh̷̘̳͑ệ̸̛r̴͎̔e̴͈̘̒̌ ̵̛̹̄m̷̳͖̚o̵̹̩͌̂r̶̳̦̆e̷̥̓̾ ̵̡͚͋͠c̵̢̯̊ḧ̶̨́a̴̭̰̅̑p̸̝͔̽͒t̶̼̘͊e̷̘͋̅r̶̠̂̓ş̷͇͗?̵̙̇?̴̰̔́?̵̧̃?̵͕͛ͅ ̵̦̱̐̈́ lmao jk buT GOD I WANT MORE OF THIS
| maharzoubari chapter 1 . 4/27/2021
will you continue
| Stofyn chapter 8 . 4/12/2021
This is wonderful and amazing, and I love how you portrayed Gokudera! I'm super excited for next time because I feel like Tsuna would try to be secretive, but then again there's a chance that he would tell Reborn everything anyway, cause it's Reborn (and he would find out anyway XD) so the possibilities are endless!
Thank you for writing this I hope you have a great day! :3
| Sarcastic Vixen chapter 8 . 2/5/2021
This story is great, it's a shame they haven't updated it for years and I really want to know what Tsuna responds to Reborn and how does he react if she tells him about the parallel worlds.