Reviews for Pain
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Very sad. The pain you described Susan had was tangible.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Hi!

I just wanted to congratulate you for posting your story and for your desire to become a writer. That's wonderful! I didn't know I wanted to write until I was out of college.

I think the only way to learn to write is to write. And write. And write. And read a lot, too.

Keep working and learning and asking for feedback. They all help you grow as a writer. And remember nothing worth doing is without cost.

Good luck and God bless!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Fantastic! How do you think of these story lines?