Reviews for Wedding Night
hatebelow chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Lil'MissChris chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Draco's pretty low in this. It was well written aside from the Americanisms and the fact that Gin isn't a mudblood. Draco would have called her a blood traitor, if anything. There are a few typos, but nothing to speak of and a few of the dialogue lines should be broken up so it's not as jumbled.

Despite the grammatical issues and nitpicking, this is an overall a nice one-shot. It was a (guilty) pleasure to read.
starlight89 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Very good start. Just one thing. Ginny is not a mudblood. That‘s really bothering me. Was this supposed to be for another couple?
Johan Kira Expelliarmus chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Undoubtedly, Draco is a real bastard in this fanfic. I wonder how Ginny react after the events of her wedding night: Will we see a Ginny as a fighter after this, or a Ginny completely embarrassed because these events?

I hope you can update very soon your promising fanfic. Without a doubt, you've raised a truly original beginning.
dutch potterfan chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
WOW Draco is a real bastard in this story. I hope we will also see a different Ginny and not just the little helpless one.