|Reviews for In Soot, I Sleep|
| accioyourheart chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
w o w.
this is possibly the only modern day au i will read, and it has been my guilty pleasure for the past few weeks. but i've decided to finally let you have a review because i do absolutely love it.
i was a bit confused in the beginning of this chapter (i didn't realize she was on the phone with gale, but that's minor) but besides that it was really really amazing.
i don't know what to say. fantastic job.
| pretty-little-gymnast chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
Thank God you updated! Loving it,Lilac! ;)
| pretty-little-gymnast chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
Thanks for finally updating! Very nice!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
UPDATE! Please, this is fantastic!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This is super good! Update soon, please!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
This is a great story. I just thought I'd tell you I love your writing. I love how you made Cato and Clove act. A different look on things. Keep it up, please update when you can!
| thegirlwhocriedbadwolf chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I'm loving this so far. I especially enjoy how you've made Glimmer out to be pretty genuine and funny (its a good change from the usual 'Queen Bee' role she takes on in most fics), and their relationship interests me. And you can't go wrong with a little profanity from Johanna ;)
Great work, looking forward to your update!
| SCPetit chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
I barely understand most of the text because it includes a lot of words I don't know, but I think I got the point. It's really good, 'cause you know the story starts whit Cato and Clove you know from different perspectives so... Yeah, I can't wait to read the next chapters.
| OMGitsgreen chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
I like what you're doing with Cato by giving him a younger brother (Marvel, who I've never seen play the role). It rounds out his character rather well. I would suggest adding his parents in, or mention them, because it seems like Cato is acting as a substitute parent. What sort of relationship do they have? It's important to know.
Nice snappy Clove. As sharp as a dagger, that one. (Pun intended) I hope to see a little more about her in the upcoming chapter. And great initial contact.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see an update!
| april upside down chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Fantastic! You're an incredible writer and I hope you continue!
| OdairBear chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Ah this is great, and I'm actually from virginia so I thought the little mention was cool
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
| pretty-little-gymnast chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Can't wait for another one of your stories! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Very interesting. Update soon!
| Damnage chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
First, YOU ARE SO NICE TO ME. I can't believe that people are actually writing for me and fulfilling my own selfish needs that are whored out on the blog. THANK YOU.
Second, this is wonderful. It's short and simple, yet you are already able to capture this world's feel.
I adore what you've done with the characters so far, especially with Cato and Glimmer and whatever relationship they have. Glimmer is my baby, and I'm glad to finally see a story where she isn't a one-dimensional bitch. She has a personality and is relatable and funny, and I love you. Though I must say, I can't wait until the Cato/Clove interaction!
I hope to see more soon!