Reviews for Lies
DElena all the way chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
want more
continue
please
Erin Salvatore chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
AWESOME! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! :)
sparlish chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I love this story so far and I really hope that you continue. I wish this was the way the TVD went!
cleo chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
well this was HOT :D
V chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Can't wait for another chapter! Loved it!
2serendipity chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I loved it! Elena feeding from Damon on the show was hot, but this story was better :) Aren't you planning on continuing this? It's absolutely got potential, and I'd love to see what you could do with it :)
asnoo02 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This is a really great piece of writing. Lovedit!
DelenaRain chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
cute ;)
tukct81 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I love any story that has Delena blood sharing, because I still haven't gotten over 4x02. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Wow, this was amazing! Great job. I wish we had seen this on the show. You capture the mood between them perfectly and the dialogue and interactions are so natural and believable. Really, I loved every second of it. Too bad it's only a oneshot. I totally understand Elena's uncertainty and vulnerability here and her conflicting emotions. You described them all beautifully. But of course in my head, they're now progressing from there and I'm sure in a few weeks' time they'd be together. And obviously I'd like to read that. Especially since I'm always so excited to get to read something you wrote!
Thanks for sharing, even if the show has already moved on. It was a wonderful scene. xoxo
edanurbarak chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Waow. That was incredible! Please continue! And that "blood-sharing" is kinda personal rigth? Like sex? İ don't know but I hope it was! And please Damon feed on her too, please! I can't wait the next chapter! And I know it wll be amazing. And I feel like Elena get jealous! And Damon like I said before please fed on Elena! See ou soon XoXo
sarah chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
solid writing as per usual and an interesting premise however this read as a fragment of a story rather than a story itself. it felt incomplete, a sentence started but not finished. you might want to consider fleshing it out if you have the time.
LenaBV chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
A really great one-shot.
I don't like most of the fanfics 'situated' near 3.22 or 4.01, because they're similar... But I can't resist your writing skills :)
This is certainly not fluffy fic where Elena remembered all scenes with Damon and immediatly declared her undying love. It's different, and I like it so much!
Elena couldn't change her mind - and choice - just yet (I'm talking about 4.01-Elena-version). She needs time to understand her true feelings. And it's good enough that she's already accepted she couldn't go through all of this new-vampire thing without help of our favourite blue-eyed vamp.
Thank you!
WhisperInTheDawn chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
This was incredible! :) Great job! :)