Reviews for Supernatural Series 9X3 Return to Sender
LunaAWESOMNESS chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
hi .-

Like your story/stories though I don't really get them :P
they're funny but much too confusing.
I read another's review about you "stealing" some of the things but found out rather quickly that you have asked permission and I would just like to say thumbs up! not many people do that and it's really a pity. but you should probably write something about you having permission from the other author or others might get the same misunderstanding :/
my last advice:
instead of publishing the stories as a lot of two-chapter stories publish them as one. it makes it easier for people following the stories to get an overview and since it all happens same place/time/family and so on it just seems like a lot of work to make lots of stories instead of one and some people won't realize that there's more to them if they have only read one of them and will get confused.
try putting it in one story. I'm sure it will work and it will probably attract more readers :D

keep up the good work and I really do think you've got something you just have to work with it a bit more.
hope you can use my advice
love LuneAWESOMNESS
917brat chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
sounds really intresting.