Reviews for A Full Metal Valentine
Saory2000 chapter 1 . 1/14
I enjoyed the story !
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featherdusterpixie chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Ominae chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This is an awesome FMP fic centered on Valentine's Day.

Haven't read a fic based on this idea though.
AdoraBelleSpikeDearheart chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Awesome. :)
Stratofarius chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
That was entertraining. I have never watched the show, but it did make me smile, so now it got into the bottom of my "to watch" list. The characters were fun, and altogether, it was a short and sweet story.

Just a minor complaint, and one that has already been raised by a reviewer, Valentine's Day?... not exactly a Japanese tradition.
Lightflame The Warrior chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Wow, that was pretty funny. I've never seen the show, but the story was short and sweet. I like the last line, which is both humourous, and shows that he trusts her.

This story is near-perfect. The only thing I don't like is Valentine's Day being called "a tradition of the Japanese", because that makes it sound culturally exclusive when it obviously isn't. Other than that, keep up the good work!
Draco38 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Very cute! I enjoyed it!
BlueLion chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Nice. Sousuke's trust in Kaname is just endless. Gonna put you on author alert :-)
Tiger Priestess chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I love Souske!

This reminds me of my FMP one-shot.