Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
schizophrenic-twilight-lover chapter 26 . 9/8/2015
I adore SasuHina as a couple, and while this story made me so excited and giggly in the beginning - like middle school boy looking at porn excited and pre-teen girl with a crush giggly - I eventually found it hard to be empathetic with Hinata's extreme clingy nature. I understand that she is a character who lacks confidence, it's what makes her Hinata. But this was Hinata begging for recognition and attention... which is not like her at all. And somehow, Sasuke puts up with her despite this even though he is not at all the type of person to do so. I don't know, your writing is fun to read but the story really missed the mark for me. Even the happy ending failed to redeem the story for me, because they are obviously so unhealthy for each other when presented as they were here. I hope you take this as someone who loved reading your writing, but wants to give you some constructive criticism. Please don' t take offence. I think you are extremely talented, but this is my two cents on the story.
You Light The Sky chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
KikAssAwesomeness chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
So he knows why she's there?
ThisIsANiceName chapter 6 . 6/7/2015
omg. XD fire lord ozai.
Bakugods chapter 18 . 4/4/2015
Oh God, my heart is gonna burst.
C3siah chapter 26 . 4/3/2015
Amazing story. I think this humor it is not the typical humor, but I really liked it
Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...

Tsukiome chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
I enjoyed this chapter very much
Guest chapter 21 . 11/8/2014
cuuuute sassy hina
ElvenMuggle chapter 26 . 9/4/2014
Hi, Bullwinkle's Lady! This was the first of your fics that I've read and I wanted to tell you that I've loved it. Not just the story itself, but the characterization, the relationships between the characters (mainly team seven), your casual sense of humor (I think I laughed the most at Naruto and Sasuke's fight in the bathhouse) and your incredible talent as a story teller. I can't really say which part was my favorite, as I loved so much of it but...It might be the mention if Neji's toaster in chapter 16 because it was so...weirdly hilarious.

I will be back to read and review more of your stories! Thank you for writing this :)
Juri.DP chapter 6 . 8/16/2014
Fire Lord Ozai... I didn't catch that the first time because I hadn't been invested in Avatar, but now... Oh! I paused for such a long time just staring.

Then I smiled.

Oh, Winkle.
Juri.DP chapter 5 . 8/15/2014
Haha! I'm reading this again. I'm a bit sad and your stories help. Yup, yup, yup!

I really like this fic. You write the characters so incredibly well.
x.SHABBY.x chapter 26 . 7/25/2014
I loved this story!
Beautiful :D
x.SHABBY.x chapter 14 . 7/25/2014
You just ripped out my heart... Dx
Sasuke's a jerk...
x.SHABBY.x chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
Lol. Fire lord Ozai. Haha.
That's great. XD
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