Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
Fenris Jin chapter 25 . 1/6/2014
The hospital might be overcompensating their lack of medic nins by doping Hinata enough.. But I sadly have to admit that Hinata's been a bit pathetic with her emotions. I had hoped she would be a bit more confident. Even by just a little. It's like everything he says makes her doubt him and she finds an ulterior motive for the most innocent remarks.. Curious that during the beginning of the story she seemed more confident of his nature.. She seems to be regressing the more intimate they become.

The evil babies were funny though.. and Sasuke being awfully suspicious of the IV was really a kicker.. and come on.. who can resist the way he keeps obesessing over her?! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 1/6/2014
Gaara wants to cuddle? I like to cuddle. Mou! Ino isn't very likeable in this fic. I've noticed it earlier on. Such a shame.. I liked her tons more than Sakura.. Huhu. T_T

Poor Sasuke still hasn't been able to have his way with Hinata! Hmm.. Now that his food allergies have been revealed, I'm actually quite surprised that he's still alive at this point. Any of the most pathetic assassination mission could have done him in.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 1/6/2014
It's funny how these two can be such knucklehead. First Hinata is angry Sasuke tried to take advantage of her drunken state, while he was angry that she didn't 'help'. The next second, Sasuke was being the prude, asking where she wants to be kissed, and Hinata 'helping' him.

Oh hormones. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 19 . 1/6/2014
Sasuke's getting Hinata drunk on purpose. LOL, Anyway, so far in the story, Sasuke and Naruto had engange in more tumbling, straddling, biting and groping than SasuHina ever had.. I suppose Sasuke was just making up for that.. Right? XD
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 1/6/2014
The Hyuuga curse is finally revealed to our two unsuspecting doujutsu users. Personally, I have my doubts about this curse. It may very well be an old wives tale told among powerful clans to discourage their heirs from being chummy with each other.. LOL
Fenris Jin chapter 16 . 1/6/2014
Hmm.. The bathhouse quite a place to be after all. Here I thought Kiba was just making things up. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 1/6/2014
Waaah! Is it torture Sasuke time yet? I love this part!

Naruto was such a meanie! Why was he trying to get his friend's girl soon after they're break-up! I'm glad you didn't let Hinata succumb. But I'm guessing Sasuke still isn't going to get her back despite this. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 1/6/2014
Neji and Kiba! LOL, Such evilness directed to Sasuke. XD

I guess Kiba was right at his assassination attempt at Sasuke after all?
Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 1/6/2014
Love this confession! I hadn't believed Hinata at first.. But I guess she was right. Weird really sums up Sasuke. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 1/6/2014
Aww.. So, sweet of the boys to finally shower Hinata with their attention. I almost felt bad for them to be forgetting Sakura. That is, almost. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 1/6/2014
Nice work on Naruto! XD

Poor Sasuke almost drowned for the zipper incident. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 1/6/2014
Sweet perversion! XD

Poor Neji and Hiashi will blow a fuse when they find out about this. Neji's too young to have an aneurysm! XP

Anyway, funny how they used to frolic with each other alone in the training grounds, now they're really just showing it off to everyone! In the hospital no less! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
I think the "absorb his fever" in the Fushigi Yuugi was just an excuse for Miaka to get naked. What can I say, the girl likes to take off her clothes, I guess a fever was just another one in her long line of excuses.. XD

I wonder what noises were Kakashi referring to that drove him out of his apartment? Nothing untoward happened, and if anything, the way the two were discussing their love life, Kakashi should have been gobbling up all the gossip!XD
Fenris Jin chapter 6 . 1/6/2014
Sasuke shouldn't feel so bad.. a lot of evil master minds have used world domination as a distraction to get over a girl's rejection. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
Hungry huh? For what,may I ask? LOL

The basket thing was gold, poor thing. My brother and I harass the fridge in a similar way.. And Kakashi.. Oh, I just love Kakashi. XD
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