Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
mzeyang18 chapter 24 . 7/24/2014
Pi!
3.14...?
mzeyang18 chapter 18 . 7/24/2014
"Want U Back"

Uh!
Mmm, yeah.
La la la la laaa
Uh!

Hey, boy you never had much game
Thought I needed to upgrade
So I went and walked away way way
Uh
Now, I see you've been hanging out
With that other girl in town
Looking like a pair of clowns clowns clowns
Uh

Remember all the things that you and I did first?
And now you're doing them with her
Remember all the things that you and I did first?
You got me, got me like this
Uh
And now you're taking her to every restaurant
And everywhere we went, come on!
And now you're taking her to every restaurant
You got me, got me like this
Uh

Boy you can say anything you wanna
I don't give a shh, no one else can have ya
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh
I broke it off thinking you'd be cryin'
Now I feel like shh looking at you flyin'
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh

Please, this ain't even jealousy (jealousy)
She ain't got a thing on me (a thing on me)
Tryin' to rock them ugly jeans jeans jeans
Uh
You clearly didn't think this through
If what I've been told is true (is it true?)
You'll be crawling back like boo hoo hoo
Uh

Remember all the things that you and I did first?
And now you're doing them with her
Remember all the things that you and I did first?
You got me, got me like this
Uh
And now you're taking her to every restaurant
And everywhere we went, come on!
And now you're taking her to every restaurant
You got me, got me like this
Uh

Boy you can say anything you wanna
I don't give a shh, no one else can have ya
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh
I broke it off thinking you'd be cryin'
Now I feel like shh looking at you flyin'
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh

Ooh, I thought you'd still be mine
When I kissed you goodbye uh oh uh oh
Ooh, and you might be with her
But I still had you first uh oh uh oh

[Astro - rap verse]
Let's go! Astro!
We used to be, but now there's a separation between you and me
Baby I'm moving on to another girl that understands me more
Dated her in front your place so you can see it all
I remember the times, when we used to bond
But I never realized that you wanted to be mine
So I gave her the ring, instead of you, nickname too
I can tell that you're upset, because it ain't you
Met a new girl, and I gave her my heart
Not noticing that you wanted me from the very start
You want me back?
We can just be friends, don't try this thing all over again
Come on

Ohhh-Oh-oh-oh
Boy you can say anything you wanna
I don't give a shh, no one else can have ya
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh
I broke it off thinking you'd be cryin'
Now I feel like shh looking at you flyin'
I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh la la la la laaa

(Let me know)

Ohhh, I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh

Ohhh, I want you back
I want you back
Wa-want you, want you back
Uh

Does I sound like a helicopter (bbbbbbrrrrrddddd)?
mzeyang18 chapter 14 . 7/24/2014
Why Neji,Kiba? Why? Does one's happiness not matter at all to you?
mzeyang18 chapter 8 . 7/24/2014
OHHhhhh!
GFY-IDGAFF chapter 26 . 7/23/2014
Great read!
GFY-IDGAFF chapter 13 . 7/23/2014
Yeah
GFY-IDGAFF chapter 12 . 7/23/2014
Sorry Naruto, but you're mad late...should have kept your eyes on the prize man! Not the pink-haired man beast.
Lady Spain chapter 26 . 6/28/2014
Great story!
Juri.DP chapter 17 . 5/14/2014
O...mi...gawd... Lady! I'm starting to think some of my dialogue has been unconsciously influenced by your fics! Like, dialogue in my fic, to be exact. I'm so ashamed... I must change it all! I'm so tired of looking at it, though. But, really, these last three chapters I've been like, "Crap! I think I accidentally stole!"

I shall...fix it!

And I'll just read oooooooone more chapter...
Juri.DP chapter 16 . 5/14/2014
Adjcxfkkgadkgsxjhd! I was thinking about this particular break-up and just so happened to skip to the right chapter (15) with the scene I wanted to see and sjgsdkksaajidsd! Now I'm here and had to inform you of this occurrence you, otherwise, would not have known of! I'm going to keep reading until they make up, then I'm re-reading this whole thing. Ah!

Oh...

I mean...

Like.
Ashrikaya chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Hinata didn't cheat, the jyuuken is a taijutsu style for the hyuugas
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 14 . 4/29/2014
I like SasuHina and all, but the way I see the pairing, isn't sexually... But more like plain, mature, attraction. This fanfic made their relationship have absolutely no depth, except that there are these two people who just randomly hook up. Like Delena. Even though I love delena xD

There characters are out of character, and they act similar to how they would act if they were in a relationship of SasuSaku and NaruHina. Sasuke just sees her as this girl that's just THERE (like SS) and Hinata sees him as her new little teenage crush.

Sasuke and Hinata are my favorite characters, and they compliment each other well, I just don't think your very good at writing them as a pairing..
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
That was REALLY OOC.
sandy-ramen-thief chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
...Fire Lord... Ozai? Going Avatar much? hahaha hilarious!
srasanswa chapter 18 . 4/26/2014
good chapter...sooo nice
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