|Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse|
| Zuul81 chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
So Kiba thinks Chouji is handsome ?!
It was really random and funny. My favorite part of the chapter. Well... that and the sexy time.
| shnickers chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
Hah, I loved it! Your writing reads much more fluidly now. As fun as it was to have your random observations thrown in there, it did kind of throw off the rhythm, so I'm glad you've evolved your writing to still have the same charm and personality as your younger self but with a more mature consistency.
SasuHina sexy times are always a plus, too. I distinctly remember old LiD having an "uncomfortable" brand of sexiness to it (though that could also just be my old awkward teenage self projecting!), but THC seems to have upgraded to incorporate sensuality more for the characters than for the story itself, if that makes sense.
Argh, your inclusion of Kiba's older brother-ing makes me long for some good KibaHina. There are not too many of those out there. I can't help but like the combination; it's like NaruHina, but more for the real world!
Anyways, glad that Hinata has taken her stance. At the beginning of the review, I thought she might have reached lovey-dovey feelings a little too quickly, but after marinating on it (for the two minutes I've been writing this review - I am THAT good at talking myself into things) and given her personality and stance on love, it makes sense that she might think that. Now, the ball passes to Sasuke. Wondering what conflict there will be between the two (they haven't even reached that stage and I'm already waiting for them to break up?! What is wrong with me...), if Naruto will make an advance on Hinata, and if Chouji will be let down gently.
| HermionenDraco368 chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
awww I love the sasuke and hinata moments there so cute!
| aurora0914 chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
cute , cute , cute ! please , im perverted , so lemons ! update soon !
| khateelynn chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
Loved Naruto's reaction at the end. Ahh, I'm obsessed with this story! It's so much better than the old one, I guess. XD
| onlyluna chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
That was too cute. I loved this chapter so much. It's always nice to read your updates
| Juvia Loxar chapter 12 . 7/12/2013
I love how you portray Naruto here.
And I know it's Sasuke x Hinata, but I love how conflicted/jealous!Naruto - hope to see more of him :)
| Senbonzakura22 chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Hehe, Hinata sure told Naruto with that statement: "J-Just call me Hinata." I look forward to even more chapters now that she's staked her claim on Sasuke. ;D
| Diablo's Heir chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
orangutans, just orangutans.
| darknessunbidden chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Lovw this chapter! :)
| cookie chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
I am loving this story! I can't wait for you to update again!
| Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
wow , the moment most dramatic ever
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Great update. Kiba was funny. I liked how he was just throwing boys at her, lol. The question is, is out of brotherly love or just love love. Can't wait for the next update. :)
| klausality chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
Aw dang, ya missed out Naruto! Also loving the big bro vibe from Kiba! great chapter
| Cascade00 chapter 12 . 7/11/2013
That's right Naruto you lost a perfectly good, beautiful, smart, and kind girl! There is no way I ever want to see Hinata with you! She looks so much better with Sasuke!