Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 14 . 4/29/2014
I like SasuHina and all, but the way I see the pairing, isn't sexually... But more like plain, mature, attraction. This fanfic made their relationship have absolutely no depth, except that there are these two people who just randomly hook up. Like Delena. Even though I love delena xD

There characters are out of character, and they act similar to how they would act if they were in a relationship of SasuSaku and NaruHina. Sasuke just sees her as this girl that's just THERE (like SS) and Hinata sees him as her new little teenage crush.

Sasuke and Hinata are my favorite characters, and they compliment each other well, I just don't think your very good at writing them as a pairing..
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
That was REALLY OOC.
sandy-ramen-thief chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
...Fire Lord... Ozai? Going Avatar much? hahaha hilarious!
srasanswa chapter 18 . 4/26/2014
good chapter...sooo nice
srasanswa chapter 13 . 4/26/2014 sweetttttttt
tayee chapter 26 . 4/25/2014
This was such a pleasant read. I was fully engaged and didn't feel the need to skip through any parts. I thoroughly enjoyed/loved it!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
I thought they were supposed to be faraway from each other?
Guest chapter 26 . 2/11/2014
I didn't read it the first time around but I'm really pleased with the current version. It was nice to read from start to finish and seemed to flow very well. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
I read Light a long time ago, I can't wait to read this, thanks for rewriting it.
Fenris Jin chapter 26 . 1/6/2014
LOL, I know I should be gushing when he had called her 'wife'.. But at that moment, all I could imagine was Hiashi and Neji having a bitch fit once they found out Hinata had married so informally! XD

Funny story, a lot of crack scenes that had me laughing really hard! Congrats on finishing. :)
Fenris Jin chapter 25 . 1/6/2014
The hospital might be overcompensating their lack of medic nins by doping Hinata enough.. But I sadly have to admit that Hinata's been a bit pathetic with her emotions. I had hoped she would be a bit more confident. Even by just a little. It's like everything he says makes her doubt him and she finds an ulterior motive for the most innocent remarks.. Curious that during the beginning of the story she seemed more confident of his nature.. She seems to be regressing the more intimate they become.

The evil babies were funny though.. and Sasuke being awfully suspicious of the IV was really a kicker.. and come on.. who can resist the way he keeps obesessing over her?! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 1/6/2014
Gaara wants to cuddle? I like to cuddle. Mou! Ino isn't very likeable in this fic. I've noticed it earlier on. Such a shame.. I liked her tons more than Sakura.. Huhu. T_T

Poor Sasuke still hasn't been able to have his way with Hinata! Hmm.. Now that his food allergies have been revealed, I'm actually quite surprised that he's still alive at this point. Any of the most pathetic assassination mission could have done him in.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 1/6/2014
It's funny how these two can be such knucklehead. First Hinata is angry Sasuke tried to take advantage of her drunken state, while he was angry that she didn't 'help'. The next second, Sasuke was being the prude, asking where she wants to be kissed, and Hinata 'helping' him.

Oh hormones. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 19 . 1/6/2014
Sasuke's getting Hinata drunk on purpose. LOL, Anyway, so far in the story, Sasuke and Naruto had engange in more tumbling, straddling, biting and groping than SasuHina ever had.. I suppose Sasuke was just making up for that.. Right? XD
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 1/6/2014
The Hyuuga curse is finally revealed to our two unsuspecting doujutsu users. Personally, I have my doubts about this curse. It may very well be an old wives tale told among powerful clans to discourage their heirs from being chummy with each other.. LOL
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