Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
GFY-IDGAFF chapter 13 . 7/23/2014
GFY-IDGAFF chapter 12 . 7/23/2014
Sorry Naruto, but you're mad late...should have kept your eyes on the prize man! Not the pink-haired man beast.
Lady Spain chapter 26 . 6/28/2014
Great story!
Juri.DP chapter 17 . 5/14/2014
O...mi...gawd... Lady! I'm starting to think some of my dialogue has been unconsciously influenced by your fics! Like, dialogue in my fic, to be exact. I'm so ashamed... I must change it all! I'm so tired of looking at it, though. But, really, these last three chapters I've been like, "Crap! I think I accidentally stole!"

I shall...fix it!

And I'll just read oooooooone more chapter...
Juri.DP chapter 16 . 5/14/2014
Adjcxfkkgadkgsxjhd! I was thinking about this particular break-up and just so happened to skip to the right chapter (15) with the scene I wanted to see and sjgsdkksaajidsd! Now I'm here and had to inform you of this occurrence you, otherwise, would not have known of! I'm going to keep reading until they make up, then I'm re-reading this whole thing. Ah!


I mean...

ElysianEmperor chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Hinata didn't cheat, the jyuuken is a taijutsu style for the hyuugas
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 14 . 4/29/2014
I like SasuHina and all, but the way I see the pairing, isn't sexually... But more like plain, mature, attraction. This fanfic made their relationship have absolutely no depth, except that there are these two people who just randomly hook up. Like Delena. Even though I love delena xD

There characters are out of character, and they act similar to how they would act if they were in a relationship of SasuSaku and NaruHina. Sasuke just sees her as this girl that's just THERE (like SS) and Hinata sees him as her new little teenage crush.

Sasuke and Hinata are my favorite characters, and they compliment each other well, I just don't think your very good at writing them as a pairing..
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
That was REALLY OOC.
sandy-ramen-thief chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
...Fire Lord... Ozai? Going Avatar much? hahaha hilarious!
srasanswa chapter 18 . 4/26/2014
good chapter...sooo nice
srasanswa chapter 13 . 4/26/2014 sweetttttttt
tayee chapter 26 . 4/25/2014
This was such a pleasant read. I was fully engaged and didn't feel the need to skip through any parts. I thoroughly enjoyed/loved it!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/19/2014
I thought they were supposed to be faraway from each other?
Guest chapter 26 . 2/11/2014
I didn't read it the first time around but I'm really pleased with the current version. It was nice to read from start to finish and seemed to flow very well. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
I read Light a long time ago, I can't wait to read this, thanks for rewriting it.
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