Reviews for The Hyuuga Curse
shin chapter 12 . 9/24/2013
Lmao at leeten reaction!
shin chapter 11 . 9/24/2013
Loved that last part. Poor Naruto tho. How awkward. XD
shin chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
Haha freaking Sasuke. So smug.
shin chapter 9 . 9/24/2013
Lol I was actually wondering about that. I've read it elsewhere. About the absorbing fever. Anyway, awesome chapter once again.
shin chapter 8 . 9/24/2013
Great chapter. I'm enjoying the tension.
shin chapter 7 . 9/24/2013
Lol! Damn trees.
shin chapter 6 . 9/24/2013
Hehehe I loved the Sakura bit. Now he can feel awkward around everyone. X)
shin chapter 5 . 9/24/2013
Yay, I'm reading this one again. X) great chapter.
Less Than Threee chapter 26 . 9/23/2013
Hello. I've read the original version of this years ago, and I can say that your writing has improved. Though, there are still things that I found lacking. Sasuke and Hinata's relationship could use a bit more.. foundation. I think they fell in love too suddenly with little basis. Also, Hanabi should have been integrated more. In the beginning, she played an important part in getting the two together, and then wasn't mentioned until several chapters later. And where was Hiashi during all of this? While I think your writing was really good, you just need to improve on character development. Well done, overall.
THC fan chapter 26 . 9/15/2013
Honestly, Bullwinkle, when you said this story wasn't going to be all-out funny, you couldn't be further from the truth. The Hyuuga Curse was freaking hilarious! The humor just fit the characters, and none of it seemed stilted/forced. It was refreshing to read a SasuHina story that's a romantic comedy (though dramas are pretty good too). I loved so many of the funny parts but my top favorites had to be the scuffle between Naruto and Sasuke in the Bathhouse and Neji drowning The Uchiha with a manic Kiba cheering him on lol (and Shikamaru floating facedown in the waters XD)

Anyway, I appreciate you taking the time to write this story. It was definitely worth the read!

I look forward to reading the sequel!
srasanswa chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
nice description on every single moments and little things
Guest chapter 23 . 9/10/2013
And of course, having now read further, I see that I was mistaken and she legitimately just forgot, rather than you missing the change. Still, now that I've made the effort to write this I feel the need to criticize somewhat. If I'm wrong I will not come fix it again so feel free to put it down to the ramblings of, well, me. Firstly, it's quite far fetched for her to forget something she was proud of. Secondly, you shouldn't put in references such as "in chapter 3." The reader has been there, they should remember. It takes away from the immersion. Just my opinion, I could be horrifically mistaken. Again, sorry for the phone text
Guest chapter 23 . 9/10/2013
Something you seem to have missed with the edit of light. In this version Hinata was well aware, at least at the beginning of the story, that sasuke was allergic to shellfish, "especially lobster." Despite making this change, you've kept the whole fiasco of hinata not knowing and kissing sasuke that was in the original. Just noticed and thought I'd bring it to your attention so you watch for discrepancies in the future. That is all :) Sorry for any grammatical errors and the like, wrote this on my phone
Dangerously Disheveled chapter 26 . 9/9/2013
i so love this story! Thanks so much! :D
Tammy1234 chapter 26 . 9/8/2013
Awwwwwwwww this was so cute I enjoyed every bit of it
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