Reviews for Armor
Ase Of SpADeZ chapter 8 . 3/20/2016
Come back :'(
approximationOfhumanity chapter 9 . 1/14/2016
Even though I'm not interested in Tali, yours is definitely the kind of Shepard I enjoy reading about and enjoy myself I did.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/2/2016
Single greatest string of 9 chapters in writing history. Either continue this or go write professionally and let us know, otherwise we will all dissolve from sadness.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
Without question the most interesting and fresh MA fanfic I've read, and I've read a lot.
NoNameAvailable Bis chapter 9 . 10/14/2015
Too bad the updates did not, in fact, get quicker, because that's certainly a story worth reading. The way you write your characters is quite impressive. Anyway, who knows? Maybe inspiration will strike again one of those days. In the meantime, good job!
SilentFoxKit chapter 9 . 8/15/2015
really like that u actually gave Shepard a backstory besides the paragraph of info that bioware gave us, still liking the story so far please keep going. side note really looking forward to how Tali and Shepard get along there are not nearly enough fshep/tali fanfics.
justafanr3ading chapter 9 . 6/6/2015
I'm here like Rose from titanic
"come back... come back" ;)
Its Me Fi chapter 9 . 4/2/2015
good work
McDouggal chapter 9 . 2/28/2015
I honestly like this Shepard. It's definitely a type of Shepard that I'd play, and you do a good job of keeping her character consistent. I like that you're hyping up the morally grey Shepard; that's something that Bioware didn't do a good job of in the games. You had the choice of paragon or asshole without moral compass. This Shepard works well with the role of the man that twatwaffle in Kasumi's loyalty mission mentions in his speech.

Please come back, this is probably my favorite unfinished fanfic.
SixPerfections chapter 6 . 2/21/2015
Damn i am continually impressed by the quality of this. it pains me that it hasnt been updated in forever. really cant wait for Tali and Shep to interact
SixPerfections chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
You shepard was really kinda terrifying. It was really different. First time in a long time a character made me want to crap my pants. lolz :D the last bit kind of made her seem like less of a monster, but damn...

Dis iz reel gud

4 relz
SixPerfections chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Wow. Just, really good first chapter. It was well written, intelligent, and it felt like real people in real situations. I thought I loved the Tali bit but then the Shepard bit was even better. Her confused 16 year old awkward offer made it seem like real, and the Rodriguez guy thankfully wasnt a skeevball. Just.. really looking forward to more. High quality writing here.
TheRageBunnyDog chapter 9 . 11/25/2014
Please continue this, for the love of all Talimancers, I really want to read more, your portrayal of Shepard is what makes this story, most just slap on a 100% paragon or renegade and leavevit like that, your shepard is more grey, and I personally enjoy reading it.
Nouvel Oblique chapter 9 . 11/18/2014
Hi MountainGoats,
I just finished the posted chapters and thought I would leave a review. I think it has been absolutely great thus far. Shepard/Tali is my favourite pairing and I am always looking for good stories about them. I can't wait till they meet - I know you might have some trouble updating, but don't worry about that, take your time. I've run into that trouble with my own stories before.
Your grasp of the Mass Effect and military technicalities and terminology is excellent. You really present a convincing spin on the events of the series. Everyone who played the games has their own stories of each event and it's always fun to see them written down like this - and, of course, the material before and in between.
As for Shepard's character, I believe it is developing nicely. It is always difficult to keep track of a renegade Shepard especially if they are deceptive or have hidden depths. But the presentation of her thoughts has kept that on an even keel. It is a bold choice to make her a genuinely disturbed character, in the sense that she seems to feel pleasure in inflicting violence, but one that fits the context that you have applied. She might reflect on her father's genetic or social contribution to her emotional state at a later date, in my humble opinion, as that is lurking in the background. Otherwise, the way she is "armoring" herself, channeling her destructive impulses, is entirely convincing. I feel as if she is, of course, walking down a dark and dangerous path and look forward to seeing how a young Quarian can interact with her.
Wolfman217 chapter 9 . 11/12/2014
Awseome :D I am loving this RenaShep :D Psychotic Sociopathic FemShep FTW :D Hope you update
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