Reviews for Four Leaf Clover
Hi I'm new here chapter 9 . 12/29/2015
"Villan Pub". Have you ever heard oh How It Should Have Ended? From
Jaytheraven chapter 31 . 6/24/2015
That's was beautiful
The Great Fanfiction Wizard chapter 31 . 4/5/2014
Great story
J.J.Jenna chapter 31 . 10/29/2013
You people are perfect. Besides the lack of punctuations it was great. And for the Malerie chaps, occasionally I felt as if you just rushed through them. Otherwise, I love you guys! Can't wait to read your other fanfics! :D
J.J.Jenna chapter 30 . 10/29/2013
God these Malerie chapters. D': So sad. It seems like you're trying to make us depressed :P
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
You gotta use punctuation more. Full stops and commas help emphasize things, especially in dialogue.

Without punctuation, your story becomes confusing to read, and your characters flat and monotonous.
Bluedog197 chapter 30 . 9/29/2013
ONE WORD A'WWWWWWWWWW she finally died in peace the poor girl was just suffering i'm glad she got to be with her love one's again so all in all awesome beautiful story i hope you write more or different story's so good
Aspire Away chapter 31 . 10/1/2013
This was beautiful. Everything about the story. I loved your ideas and creativity, I felt sorrow for every sad person. AMAZING AMAZING. This is like, the best most emotional romantic story I've ever read! No wonder it took a long time to finish. All the good ideas, and you wanting us reviewers to like this! Best love story ever!
sunshineg9 chapter 30 . 9/30/2013
Awweee, that was great! You deserve a cookie!
Bluedog197 chapter 29 . 9/19/2013
ROCKIN STORY DUDE wow thats sad but at least everyone get's to be with the one they love great story and i hope you keep writing and good luck in
sunshineg9 chapter 29 . 9/19/2013
Awwww, how sweet and symbolic and peacful. I would luagh while i died.
Moonlesscat chapter 29 . 9/21/2013
*Is crying* That was a sad ending.
memmek10k chapter 29 . 9/18/2013
Great chapter
IvyVega186 chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Wow, pretty interesting so far!
sunshineg9 chapter 28 . 9/1/2013
I awwed at the end, but I thought mackenna was her duaghter or something.
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