|Reviews for Girls Gone South!|
| mcanary chapter 25 . 3/5
This story is so sweet and such a hoot to boot, lol! As you mentioned in your AN, all the romance clichés were here and done very well too. Granted there was a lot of punctuation errors thru out the story, but easy to figure out what you were trying to say. Other than that, loved the flow, time jumps were explained how things went down and it just came together very nicely. Great job and thanks for sharing.
| Cheyenne Masen chapter 25 . 3/5
So Tanya's assistant was called Angela. Jaspers assistant was called Angela. Mikes ex wife was called Angela and Bella sets him up with a new woman called Angela.
Did you even realise you did that?
I don't mean to be rude but that and all the missing words really ruined a pretty good story. Every chapter there were half sentences where we had to guess what was meant to be there. People were pointing this out every chapter but you didn't seem to listen.
You can't expect people to read your work when you're not reading it back yourself.
This is not meant as a flame but as constructive criticism and i hope you take it that way. I enjoyed the story, loved some of the characters, and even cried at parts. But at the end all i could think was "really! more Angela's. Does she even realise there were other female characters in Twilight? (Heidi, Kate, Jane, Lauren,Esme). And it's a real shame for that to be all i can think when you've obviously put so much effort in.
Well done, but really, Beta or proof read, i can't stress that enough.
| hckyfn chapter 25 . 3/2
Just finished reading. Love this story! Great ending!
| aquamysticwriter chapter 21 . 3/2
Here I am suposed to be doing homework but that went out the door when I started reading this fic. You truly have done a wonderful job at creating these characters and making them seem real. I cried my heart out over Mary Elise's death and I love the dynamic you created between all of the characters. I am excited to read the rest because i'm sure it will be just as wonderful.
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/25
Awww...loved it! Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/25
I love Klaroline as well! I keep hoping they do more with them. Oh, and I love this story!
| hannaha11104 chapter 25 . 2/25
Such a beautiful story, I absolutely loved reading it even when it made me cry or made me anxious to know what was going to happen next. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
| kymmie chapter 25 . 2/21
Loved it. Said to see it end but it was a good ending.
| Marijee chapter 3 . 2/17
Oh man! Edward definitely has a temper problem and it's giving Bella issue! LOL!
| Marijee chapter 1 . 2/17
Got this from Twifanfictionrecs. I liked the first chapter...reading on!
| Pathomnemonic chapter 2 . 2/16
Hey there, liking the story so far. Just one thing, I'm pretty sure the South is not where you go for cowboys (especially Georgia) - cowboys are more of a Western thing (Texas, Montana, Wyoming, Colorado, New Mexico, etc). Not sure if it's part of the plot point (clueless NYers who don't know where to find cowboys) or if you it's actually a plot flaw. Just saying…otherwise really like where this is going.
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/13
The spelling and grammer were absolutely AWFUL but I stuck with it. It was painful at times and I was ready to give up numerous times, but I really liked the story line and where you were headed so I stuck it out. I think you have some talent but it would probably be a good idea to get a pre-reader at the minimum. But good for you for putting yourself out there! :o)
| Peanut1981 chapter 25 . 2/12
I love it this is one awesome story you rock girl keep writing
How about some outtakes or future takes would love to know if they had a boy or girl
| Claire77 chapter 25 . 2/10
Loved it loved it! Thanks for sharing xxx
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/9
Such a good story. I laughed, I cried and I had a good tine reading this story. And I can't believe yoi killed Mary Elise she's the grandma I always wabted. Great story is going on my top 10.