|Reviews for Asleep|
| Ramax Viscurio chapter 13 . 10/17
The "Evil" Doppelganger-Angle could work if I knew who our main character is and/or who the Doppelganger is. But the little we get, even in this breakdown is just too little for me. That and the writing-style has become annoying to read. I don't know what it is exactly, but probably the lack of descriptions is what ruins it for me.
So, my apologies, but I'il take my leave. I hope you continue writing and enjoy your stories.
| Subject-00-A chapter 30 . 8/8/2021
Sadly, I saw Anna's death coming a mile away... Truly a shame, but expected.
Rest In Peace.
oh yeah, that sucks 4 u Cameron.
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/19/2020
Too many oc’s, I’m out
| The Tech Priest chapter 1 . 6/9/2020
Will the fleshy bits update this data log? It pleases the Omnissiah
| Guest chapter 65 . 6/2/2020
Okay kinda confused why chrom would wipe the floor with cameron when hes been sitting on his ass for two years while cam has been making himself into a legend.
| Guest chapter 49 . 6/2/2020
Really? No lucien kill? No antimagic for cam? The whole alternate thing is kinda fucked anyways. I swear you make cameron basically a normal person and now his alternate is a potential god killer. Great balancing.
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/2/2020
Kinda sick of the whole almost dying every few paragraphs thing. And is it just me or is he way too weak to have a badass alternate like lucien. Thats kind of ridiculous.
| Tetho chapter 7 . 5/18/2020
AWWW, little tsun-tsun Mari.
| me chapter 44 . 4/3/2020
It's a bit late but Matthew has 2 t's in it
| Viviene001 chapter 19 . 6/26/2019
Why didn’t he get a griffin! Aw...
| Viviene001 chapter 16 . 6/26/2019
Luuucien is making me hate him that’s for sure. XD
| Viviene001 chapter 15 . 6/26/2019
| Viviene001 chapter 11 . 6/26/2019
Lucien being OP is okay with me :)
Hm,rip SI tho...
| Viviene001 chapter 10 . 6/26/2019
| Viviene001 chapter 8 . 6/26/2019