Reviews for Asleep
Reem519 chapter 1 . 5/17/2023
"Yup, default male avatar. Looks like he didn't even bother to draw his sword, not surprised. Magic is OP in this game."
Lmfao no wonder why he still has that bronze sword in Smash bros.
Ramax Viscurio chapter 13 . 10/17/2022
The "Evil" Doppelganger-Angle could work if I knew who our main character is and/or who the Doppelganger is. But the little we get, even in this breakdown is just too little for me. That and the writing-style has become annoying to read. I don't know what it is exactly, but probably the lack of descriptions is what ruins it for me.
So, my apologies, but I'il take my leave. I hope you continue writing and enjoy your stories.
Subject-00-A chapter 30 . 8/8/2021
Sadly, I saw Anna's death coming a mile away... Truly a shame, but expected.
Rest In Peace.

oh yeah, that sucks 4 u Cameron.
Guest chapter 19 . 9/19/2020
Too many oc’s, I’m out
The Tech Priest chapter 1 . 6/9/2020
Will the fleshy bits update this data log? It pleases the Omnissiah
Guest chapter 65 . 6/2/2020
Okay kinda confused why chrom would wipe the floor with cameron when hes been sitting on his ass for two years while cam has been making himself into a legend.
Guest chapter 49 . 6/2/2020
Really? No lucien kill? No antimagic for cam? The whole alternate thing is kinda fucked anyways. I swear you make cameron basically a normal person and now his alternate is a potential god killer. Great balancing.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/2/2020
Kinda sick of the whole almost dying every few paragraphs thing. And is it just me or is he way too weak to have a badass alternate like lucien. Thats kind of ridiculous.
Tetho chapter 7 . 5/18/2020
AWWW, little tsun-tsun Mari.
me chapter 44 . 4/3/2020
It's a bit late but Matthew has 2 t's in it
Viviene001 chapter 19 . 6/26/2019
Why didn’t he get a griffin! Aw...
Viviene001 chapter 16 . 6/26/2019
Luuucien is making me hate him that’s for sure. XD
Viviene001 chapter 15 . 6/26/2019
Viviene001 chapter 11 . 6/26/2019
Lucien being OP is okay with me :)

Hm,rip SI tho...
Viviene001 chapter 10 . 6/26/2019
Uh oh
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