Reviews for Asleep
Zues Killer Productions chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
*shrugs* We've all been there and done that, though the scope of our stories are different.

Listen, if you do feel that this may not be finished, then I won't blame you. We're all human. We all make mistakes sometimes. It's what we learn from them that makes it count.
Resisting the Borg chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
… So now things will be getting even more strange, then.
MaskedGamer chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
Yay! You're still alive!
Krulla Chief chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
Why would he solder your hard drive? I don't know jack shit about computers and know that that is retarded. And good old Cosmic/Comic retcons. And if you problems writing this at times, write something else, like that Billboard story you have, obvious hint hint. Either way keep up the goo work.
Lord rage quit chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
Whoo Whoo. And it's coming back
Undying Soul98 chapter 69 . 11/25/2015
... bad writing, nae! Honestly, a writer is his own worst enemy and greatest critic. Yes, this might be flawed, but the fact that it remains my favorite Fire Emblem story ever is testament to the fact that you've written something brilliant. Could it be improved? Yes. Could some aspects have been better done? Maybe. Do I care? HELL NO. Because I love this story to bits, and I actually enjoy the OC characters. You made an expy of Harry Dresden, gave that guy from Cynthia's parologue some back story and have written some cool OC's, with the villainous other selves of Cameron and the gang are just so cool, and so to be honest the OC's are fine.

It would be a tragedy if this fic never finished, especially so far in. Some fanfic authors have a legacy beyond their story in the inspiration they give to others- and you were practically solely responsible for making FE SI's popular and cool again, much how Dreaming of Sunshine popularised Reincarnation SI's and Sleeping With the Girls brought the Badass Normal Multicrossover SI to the publics eye.

So please don't give this fic up. If the motivation dies, I guess it dies. We can't force you to write. Even so, don't let your own imperfections destroy your desire to write, since nothing is perfect on this site. Either way, goodluck with your writing. I eagerly look forwards to your next chapter, should it ever come. Undying Soul out.
Sugouxxx chapter 68 . 11/21/2015
Aqua/Azura/that Dancer Girl from the new Fire Emblem game dies at the end. I heard your other sis dies too and Garon your stepdad is controlled by an evil god and Hoshido Queen dies too.
DillDragon chapter 33 . 10/28/2015
Way to make Lucien out to be even more of a despicable character at the end of the chapter. Good work!
Guest chapter 43 . 10/11/2015
This less of humor and more angst
SCB Blackwing chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
good fanfic man it intresting
Guest chapter 30 . 10/9/2015
XC
Anna nooooo
Sphere Warrior chapter 4 . 10/3/2015
"grabbing a practice song"
kek
MP36PH3S chapter 65 . 9/23/2015
For some reason the dialogue in the Zytle/Cam/Lucina/Chrom battle is fucking hilarious.

Of all the SIs I've seen this one is by far the most entertaining to read, props to you for that and keeping this going for so long.
Sugouxxx chapter 31 . 9/23/2015
You know what, this is story is so good so far, but shame i can't follow this story, cause you kill anna, and that's very painful...fucked if i think about that, except you can bring all of dead character revive or use system phoenix like fire emblem fates, i think i will read them...Anna, why...and fuck you, you kill gregor, what's wrong with you? I better let chrom die than him
Maronmario chapter 50 . 9/22/2015
What are chances of finding another RWBY fan in this section of the website? And one who reads Lucina reacts as well.
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