Reviews for Black Lagoon: Ocean of Death
Tephy42 chapter 19 . 6/14/2013
Awesome Story! I was able to fallow the action really well, blow for blow you depicted the battles marvelously! The story was an easy read, no unnecessary wordy descriptions of things. The gun details were completely over my head, but they didn't slow down the read to the point where it got in the way. Some grammar mistakes, but nothing an extra proof read or a beta reader couldn't fix. The plot line did go a little over the top at some points, but hey its Black Lagoon, the characters are all hardcore and I think you used them well to make a fun fic. The Rock x Revy was sweet, I especially liked the trust moment at the end there. _ Hope to read more from you soon!
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19/2013
I figured rock would give a few last words to sukander. I mean they had a odd relationship.
Guest chapter 19 . 4/30/2013
It would be nice if you make a sequel to this story
Guest chapter 19 . 4/30/2013
Nice chapter. But kind of a rushed ending. Barely any interaction between characters. How do they feel sfter the ordeal? How do rock feel about everuthing
Guest chapter 18 . 4/30/2013
I thought you have rock give a few last words to sukander before she died. Considering the wierd relationship they have.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/30/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 4/23/2013
Sigh. Rock you dummy how did you forget about the clips and now she is going to rape you. Lol. Sucks to be you. Any how please update.
TYZO300 chapter 17 . 4/24/2013
Final battle who will be the alpha female pirate next chapter please
TYZO300 chapter 15 . 4/15/2013
hahahaha classic Can't wait to see how this turns out in the end
Guest chapter 14 . 4/13/2013
Nice chapter, i can see that the short chapters are build up for the major conflict of the story. I hope rock is not conered and being raped by that crazy .
Guest chapter 13 . 4/13/2013
Interesting but short chapter. Keep up the good work.
TykkiMikk chapter 14 . 4/11/2013
hm i was kinda expecting her to block one of the guys blades with her teeth and crush it between her jaws and scaring the piss out of Jusuf but this was just as good and bloody
TykkiMikk chapter 13 . 4/9/2013
overkill much?
Guest chapter 12 . 4/5/2013
Lets hope revy get to rock first before that crazy lady does. Short, but nice chapter. Keep up the good work and update.
TYZO300 chapter 12 . 4/2/2013
Was beginning to think something happened to you anyway great chapter
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