|Reviews for First Love, Last Memory|
| Vegetable lov3r chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Awesome and sad what if. I feel bad for Irie, because Kotoko had more posibilities of happiness without him than Irie without her. If Kotoko would not been in his life, Irie never would come out of his cold shell u.u
Thank god for the eartquakes XD
Cool one-shot, but if someday you want to continue it... *wink* *wink*
| Golden Eyed Writer chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Well, that was sad. It's hard to think about them NOT being together. :/
Golden Eyed Writer
| sadymylady chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
wow i really liked it could you do a sequal to this it was awesome
| bulmakotoko chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
the plot is nice
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
wahhhhhhhhhhhhh this is so sad you shoul continue this story
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Mehn, you can write. I admit I skipped here and there, but I did turn back and re read it all over! :) Keep up the good work!
| Millie M chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Interesting. I like this turn of events. Nice interpretation of this What-If Universe. Congrats! :D
| Lizzie-San chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I love happy endings. Warm Fuzzies are friends to all. But there is nothing I respect more in a writer than the pride in writing a sad ending. I applaud you.
| azerjaban chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Wow, that's exactly what could have happened. Thank god for minor earthquakes huh?
I feel worse for Irie, he's probably miserable...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Excellent! Now you made want to think of what could have happened after... Maybe some day you'll decide to write more. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
that was a touching story... very realistic n thoughtful... loved the POV of the story. there is a scope to make this fic longer... if u ever get "the direction", don't hesitate to move forward! :) :)
| ruby890 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Nice. More sad for ire knew his life would would suck without koto.
| khairunnisa chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
this "what if" is really great, but sad too. we can see how significant Kotoko in Naoki's life in another universe. this story also makes me wondering, what happen to my first love too, hehehe...
in my opinion, this story should stop here, because after 5 years, their personality already changed and they are all grown up. let memories of the past stored in a box and life must go on. But, if author (dear Intensify) has change in mind and want to continue this story, i would be really really glad and want to read it.. after all, if someone really meant to each other, they'll find a way.. _
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I really like this AU! It'd be great if you could continue on with this story. I know you said its a one-shot but your writing ie great and rarely seen in fanfiction. It just seems like a waste to leave the story there. :D
| compass96 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013