Reviews for Not What It Seems
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 34 . 8/17/2016
Please at least try for a little originality next time. Goodbye.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 25 . 8/17/2016
Once again Edward is the source of drama within a Twilight fanfiction. It's like an unwritten rule, 'if ever you write a story that isn't Edward/Bella, you must have Edward as an antagonist! YOU MUST!'. I've grown bored of this.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 19 . 8/17/2016
Even the best mothers lose their temper so bad that they assault their child when they back talk? Nah.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 16 . 8/17/2016
I can only hope this doesn't turn into a tug of war between Carlisle and Edward with Bella being the rope. Nothing kills my desire to read a story faster than Edward. Ugh.
teamcarlisle21G chapter 16 . 10/15/2015
i really like your writing
SouthernBelle1871 chapter 49 . 9/27/2015
I really hope you choose to resume this story. Its a great story and I'm eager to know what happens when the volturi arrive. Hope you update sometime soon
Solziv chapter 48 . 2/22/2015
Oh, Bella seeing her father again...I really feel sorry for both of them in this chapter, and I think you've put that emotion over very well. I'm wondering just what Bella's going to ask for from Jacob. Can't wait for the next part.
twilight-et-the-vampire chapter 49 . 1/26/2015
h√Ęte de la suite
Goldielover chapter 49 . 12/13/2014
Thoroughly enjoying this one. A little different than some of the other Carlisle/Bella stories I've read on this site. Hoping for an update at some point.
Laurie143 chapter 49 . 11/22/2014
Please update really soon I really want know what happens next:)
IenvyBella chapter 49 . 9/9/2014
it is a really good story and please update i know is more than a year ago ur last update but please update it for what its worth really a nice story i really like it and the reason for the voltiur coming it should be very interesting please
moregoth chapter 49 . 8/20/2014
Great story! I have enjoyed the AU you created with Bellas arrival later to Forks and how she befriends Alice as well as the gradual realisation she has for her feelings about Carlisle
Blue chapter 49 . 7/4/2014
Ah... I really liked that story. So well written. It was really easy to get lost in it and read it times and times again.
The added bonus was that you dodn't want to make a human bear a DEAD child ('cause really, who thought a dead thing could create life? they don't even have blood so they shouldn't even be able to have an erection...) but really, really, you ruined it (in my opinion) with the idea of Bella revealing to Charlie that she's still "alive".
So i thought quality of your story had decreased a bit from the moment Bella first opened her eyes as a vampire. But really, that idea isn't something i like at all.

So i'm going to thank you for such a wonderful story and consider this story as finished

As i said, i absolutly adored it until the vampire transformation. After it became, i don't know, different. The emotion behind the chapters wasn't the same. And now that.
So really, thank you very much for this story, i wish you the best.
CarlisleandEsme chapter 49 . 6/28/2014
Amazing once again! Will we see more of Esme's POV and her insecurites about love? Love the story!
catgrl chapter 49 . 6/27/2014
Oh wow so Bella wants to tell Charlie that she is alive and ask Jacob to help her.. Hope all goes well with the Volturi... Can't wait for the next update.
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