|Reviews for The True Horror of Konoha (Rewrite)|
| nikkali44 chapter 3 . 20h
It looks like you haven't writen for this story in a while, but I hope you find the desire to write/rewrite again. It's a entertaining story and I'm really curious what will happen now that Minato is back(or that may change), anyway great story hope there's more
| 0oLucifero0 chapter 3 . 7/15
Update! I read the whole original so now I wanna read this! You take too long TT iwannareadiwannareadiwannareadiwannareadiwannareadiwannareadiwannaread
| Y chapter 1 . 7/13
This shit is crazy.
| Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 1 . 6/23
I haven't read this yet but I'm planning to read it. I think the original was fine in most counts. But one thing I did notice was that Naruto ( near the end or the chunin arc ) was getting less insane. But that's the only problem I found but it'd be cool to reread it again. Anyway I do love the original and I love your writing style so thanks so much for writing.
| Brazilwolf chapter 3 . 6/15
I will write my opinion in no meaningful offense. Just stating my opinion
I do like some of the parts that you changed but I prefer the first one. Since it was more detailed in a way. I already the original and like it more since it was more longer. The new I think you were maybe trying to shorten some of the parts. But I found nothing bad with the original. Though Naruto sounds insane at some parts but nicer in other parts. I love that he is SO FUNNY. I was laughing my head off what he did when he was drunk both the times. Or what he did to Pervy Sage when caught peeking in the women's baths. I like that he is smart and really strong. Where you left off in the original was getting really interesting. I liked where you were going with it. Though I would have wished had continued the other one. I accept your decision. And can't wait to see what you will change or keep normal
| noggin777 chapter 3 . 4/4
I really liked this story! i had a bit of a bad day, but this story totally made it better!XD
| Taintedangel133 chapter 3 . 4/1
i really enjoyed reading this and i can't wait for more :P soo keep up the good work cause ill be waiting :D
| catgirl505 chapter 3 . 3/18
Giggles* i like it!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/23
Weeeeee ! :D
| PugTheMagician chapter 3 . 2/6
i love this story. there is just something hilarious about crazy characters ('potato' crazy, not 'i'm gonna kill the village' crazy). i like that you didn't hold back on what caused naruto to go nuts. you actually had a description, not just a 'the villagers beat him and now he's crazy'. i like that this is actually a crazy naruto that is still on konohas side, i haven't come across one of those before. i really like that you described that naruto's new bloodline actually hurts to use with the whole breaking and reforming bones and muscles description. i wonder, if naruto somehow ever had kids would they even be able to deal with the stress of activating the bloodline? i mean i assume naruto only could because he just experienced the pain of having muscle and skin roasted off of you continuously for 3 hours, not much more painfull than that. i loved the descriptions of the D-rank missions especially the after effects of the first tora mission being a cat already thought of as a demon now having ninja training. i thought the weapons naruto created for is team to be really creative and apt especially in the case of kurenais straight shooter. i also liked the kinjutsu style naruto uses with his scythes, it reminds me of that method of torture/execution in china, i think it was called "death of a thousand cuts" but i'm not certain. i also like that you had the torture and interrogation department actually request his services, i wonder what would happen if he ever met anko? with the ideas they could cook up no interrogation would be a challenge any more. i like the most that you have naruto and sasuke actually being cordial with eachother since hey didn't have any reason to dislike eachother in this fic. i wonder what sakura will rect like when she finds out exactly what her mother did to naruto or if she ever sees the scars all over his body. i hope you come back to this in the future as it is really fun to read
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/25
please continue the story
| kunt-destroyer420 chapter 1 . 1/20
And I'm still waiting 'chibi-kyuubi16'. Yes I realise that your name is jinx, but with the number of fics that are awesome yet untouched for quite some time (even if it's a few' you might as well call yourself chibi-kyuubi16 and you don't want that. Welp you just lost a reader.
| midnightgamin chapter 3 . 1/6
me: This is aweso-
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/6
WHY YOU ABONDON PLEASE UPATE!
| midnightgamin chapter 1 . 1/6
Ooohh reminds me of dear sweet Alessa from Silent Hill.