|Reviews for Reason For Call|
| THORina2245 chapter 20 . 3/8
This story, along with all your others, is fucking mind blowing. Each time I read the summary I think it's going to be a small ficlet but I start reading up until 4 in the morning (that happened once with 'out of milk') and I just can't emphasize how good your writing skills are so please keep bloody writing cause I need this shit like sugar in my tea, otherwise it's just nasty xxx
| foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 20 . 1/29
I honestly have no idea why it's taken me so long to get around to reading this fic! Every time I read the description for some crazy reason I thought it would be all angty and sad; instead I've read the whole thing this morning! If possible, think I loved this even more then your other fics, just because it was so cute and fluffy, but had some intriguing plot twists, which is rare to find in fan fiction. I loved your names for things, although Tardis was definitely most funny when Syoles announced he was at lunch with "Mr Tardis" - although I did get a bit too excited when I read Sam Wesson, because I thought you might do a slight crossover - so many people turn crossovers into cliche messes, but judging by your quality writing I bet you could pull it off! And about the AA groups, the most knowledge I have from them is by watching BBC Sherlock and I don't really understand why you were so worried? You wrote so respectfully and with such feeling, I really felt bad for Laura - although there wasn't much detail put into Johns reasons, I'm pretty sure we all know why he's an alcoholic mess! And I've just realised how long I've made this, so while I could write loads more about how much more in love with Sterek this fic has made me I better get off the couch and be productive! Absolutely can't wait to read more of your work :)
| Imalena chapter 20 . 1/26
I download your story on my ipad from the AO3 website. I began to read yesterday and finished it this morning. Awesome story! I love the way you write. The first story of yours that I read was "Out of milk", and then "Best thing". So now I attacked this story and woman... I had a great time. I was stupidly happy to see you were 27 when you began that story (you must be 29 or 30 now, I guess). Sometimes, being 27 myself, I feel like I'm the only one old on this website. So go us! Lol
That being said, I like how in character Stiles, Derek, Scott, Jackson and the others are. Like "Wow, that's totaly Stiles' styles" (pun intended ;-)
Thank you for taking the time to write beautiful stories for the pleasure of my eyes and heart. I laughed a couple of times, teared up when Stiles and his father fought. Yeah. Just a really good time with it.
I saw you didn't write since quite a while now, i hope nothing bad happened to you. Keep writing, and may the inspiration never leave your heart :-D
I left the same message on AO3 btw ;-)
| EccentricFox chapter 20 . 1/20
I really enjoyed reading this, up until the last chapter, which IMO is possibly the weakest part to the story with the way the story's been wrapped up in snippets. It really started getting interesting around the time the embezzlement was revealed and it felt like more could have been explored.
Don't get me wrong, I really did like your story, but I think the conclusion could do with a bit of work.
Your characterisations - especially of Stiles - were great, though Stiles' Dad was rather unlike-able, but that is a common side effect of alcoholism, so not unexpected. I really liked the call centre bits, the phone flirting and the Droner's short hand best of all.
I WAS expecting a bit more misunderstanding with the Scott/Stiles thing, followed by many hijinxs but I like the way it played out even better - you didn't torture us for too long, just enough to want to smack Derek upside the back of his head.
And the sex scenes. Well, who needs redtube, amiright? ;)
Overall, very enjoyable, funny, touching and wonderfully optimistic. It's a nice change of pace to read a story that doesn't resort to the old trick of abusing and raining down misery on the protagonists to keep it going.
As to the whole British thing, the only time I really noticed it was when you used the word 'vest' instead of wife-beater/singlet. I'm not too sure what the vernacular rightly is, being an Aussie, but I do know that vest is a British thing.
Hey, and why not set a story in England? Werewolf of London, anyone?
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/12
Your story was really good! Really cute and funny! Sterek will always be my otp ugh. Although, I can't help but be irked a little for the slight similarity it has with "Baking My Way Into Your Heart" by another author here in . The way Stiles' first way of trying to flirt with Derek was through guessing his name even though by the end it turns out he already knew it from the start, and the first meeting of Laura and Stiles and how she tells him embarassing stories about Derek when he was little. I don't know if these were intentional or not, if you posted it first or not, but I just wanted to point it out. Of course people can have the same ideas, it was just weird reading both of your stories consecutively and realizing they weren't from the same author. Hehe. :P
| Maykits chapter 20 . 12/19/2014
Loved this story! I wish it had a longer epilogue. I love that you did an epilogue, just wished it was longer...
| Machiik chapter 20 . 11/9/2014
Congratulations for this story.
I think, no I know, you are one of my favorite fanfics authors! :)
| x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 20 . 11/2/2014
Aww, this is great!
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/2/2014
I thought they died in a car accident? Drunk driver and all that?
| Dafi DA chapter 20 . 9/24/2014
Thanks for wonderful, interesting and fun story.
| graces101 chapter 5 . 8/26/2014
OMG your killing me, I need them to meet NOW ! haha
| This-Girl-Is-Riddikulus chapter 9 . 8/10/2014
Hum...you said in chapter 5 that Derek's parents were killed in a car accident tho. Meh, he and Stiles are a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e!
| This-Girl-Is-Riddikulus chapter 2 . 8/10/2014
Miss Potts is a dumbass omg xD plz get another computer
| This-Girl-Is-Riddikulus chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
You used the name Calvin twice :p, the name thing , thank god Derek is not at the end of the alphabet haha.
| luvakatsuki3 chapter 12 . 7/6/2014
Okay, so one problem.
How exactly did Stiles leap from late-Cs to Derek? And then did he what, just assume he was correct since there was never any confirmation from Derek that his name is in fact Derek? Plus, he was like half-dead asleep, and according to Derek should not even remember his conversation let alone what random name, however correct, he called Derek?
You know what I mean? Did I miss something?
Oh, and sorry, totally love the story so far, must, things like that bother me lol.
Anyway, hope to see more Mahealahey come to play :-)