Reviews for The Bite
Vangogh92 chapter 1 . 7/19/2017
Your versionso much better!
brightflare chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
really good
SilverCBurr chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Oh soo much love! I agree... a bit too manipulative, even if unintentionally, in the original script. I think this works so much better with the personalities of both.
Also, I noticed that you said you were not good with English - as a native speaker, who studied English in university and works as a writer (non-fiction, sadly!) - I think you did fantastically. There was only one slip that I noticed, the spelling of "fate" as "fait." I can't wait to read more! :)
Teodora Vuciceiv chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Dear Diabolo Framboise,

Thank you! I thought I was the only one that found Caroline out of character in that scene. Sure, she was dying, but isn't she supposed to be miss sassy?

And once again, thank you for saving Caroline's integrity and dignity!

Keep up the good work!

crazybookworm1998 chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
I love this !
Kurisutori618 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Wow you are amazing in your writing adding you to my faves right now
Look At My Comment chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
dand that was good
that si the secound story i read of your and i loved
DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Way better! If only ;)
Annabella Petrova chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I wish this happened instead
aliciastequila chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
THIS. Bless this. Most perfect thing ever, I don't know what else to say.
mobbs fellow chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I like your twist very much. Thank you.
RealitysLimits chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Omggg i wish this would have happend
ladyluck25 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
This is sooo much better than the real ending. Elena's group seems to forget all the bad they've done themselves and what did Caroline expect when she has constantly played a man who is so obviously in love with her. I mad about the wereslut, too. Can't stand her.
AgathaN chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
That was brilliant! I think I preferred your version..
I hope Caroline wasn't playing him in the last episode...however I ahve mix feeling about that :/
gizmotr chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Totally agree.
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