|Reviews for Prodigious Peverell|
| MartinAnna chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
PLease Update I loved the begininng
| BlackJackBJ chapter 2 . 1/28/2015
Please update soon...
| rowan1025 chapter 2 . 10/29/2014
You gonna update!?
| SEKHMET chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
any chance of an update?
| LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 2 . 10/12/2014
Keep goin'; you've caught my attention!
| The Whimsical Ermine chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
Great story. Update soon.
| little-bast chapter 2 . 3/1/2013
Interesting start... keep the chapters coming!
Did Harry's soul destroy Voldemorts?
Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see what you have planned...
Hoping for an update soon...
| The Weatherwitch chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
hmm interesting :P
i want to see where this goes,
update soon! :D
| Elfin69 chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
It is sad that Harry's mother sacrificed herself for them and that now his life will be changed. Hopefully he will not be abused before he becomes a Peverell. Maybe his mothers last wish for him to be happy will take effect before he can be harmed.
| Elfin69 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I cannot wait to see more and what actually happened.
| Sinclaire Silverfang chapter 2 . 2/14/2013
Keep up the good work i cant wait to see where this goes
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/14/2013
Well it's look interresing, I wonder what you people have to suddenly write such entertaining BWL-type fic all of sudden ?
Wonder what you will do with James and Lily, they are not mentioned in the summary ?...
Great chapter, it was kinda refreshing.
| Teufel1987 chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
Nice, if a little fairy tale-ish
You do need to improve upon your grammar though.
As for the story itself, I sort of saw Lily's death coming right about the time you mentioned the bond between her and Harry and James and Rodney and how one parent didn't know the other child.
I hope this isn't James bashing. He is a good guy, after all.
Wonder how Dumbledore plans on making Rodney self sacrificing …
| coldblue chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
I'm reviewing agian just to throw out some ideas, suggestions or questions so that you get some inspired to Write this story.
Here some stories who have writed WBL or Harry NOT BWL stories:
"Misconception"- Harry and Voldemort, 8 Chapters, 41,000 words, Rated T, and updated last 2/3/12. Grey/Smart Harry with Mentor Voldemort and WBWL story.
"Harry Potter, Rise From Dust"- Harry, 26 Chapters, 245,000 words, Rated T and updated last 10/15/12. Powerful, Believeable, Smart Harry with Merlin as Mentor with a Bigger Prophency. NOT Harry who is BWL and NOT God-like.
These are just some stories where you could get some inspiration.
Will Harry have More than one Familiar? Will Harry experiment on his Familiars?
If Harry a Prodigy, then will Harry be Very Smart in both Muggle and Magical Education?
Will Rodney be a compelet Idiot if this story has Golden Trio and Dumbledore Bashing?
How will Harry know that he is an Heir to the House of Perevell?
I hope you have Harry get Hidwig, but 1 more Familiar. Harry is the REAL BWL, so he a Parseltongue/Parselmouth, so why not give Harrya Snake Familiar. I just hope that Harry uses Parselongue/mouth abilites in this story. I don't expect anything big, but Maybe Harry could say Spells in Parselmouth or atleast talk to his Snake Familiar. I don't expect Parselmagic or anything. I could see Harry figuring out how to Make Hidwig and his other Familiar stronger by giving them potions or rituals to strengthen them. Image Hidwig got a little bigger, could Teleport like Dumbledore Phenoix, or have Feathers stronger than Most Metal/Magically resistant. Harry could increase Hidwig and the other Familiar Intelligence's making them Smarter.
It would be pretty cool if Harry could figure out how to be Good and capable of Surviving or Thriving in both Muggle and Magical Society. Harry could open Business in both Muggle and Magical Society and get VERY Wealth. I could just see Harry ass some Big Boss controling Corperations in Muggle World and Chain of Shops in the Magical World. If you do go with idea, then make it believeable. Like Harry slowly gain Finanical Wealth during his years at Hogwarts and gain his Muggle Business Degree Fast because nobody in the Wizard/Witch World cares for Muggle Education. Harry could get his Muggle Degree around 15 years old or something.
I'm going to guess that Rodney will be like Cannon Harry, but Stupid. A true Gryffindor (sarcastic here). Hermonine will be Jeolous of how Smart Harry is and Ron will be jeolous on how Harry will slowly gain Wealth, Ladies, Sports, and Magic. Dumbledore will try to control Harry, but Harry will be 2 steps ahead of Dumbledore. If you watched/read "Naruto" anime/manga, then I see Harry as Itachi Unichia, but with a Better personality.
I kinda Hope Harry figures out on his own or stumbles upon the Perevell Bloodline Information. It would be stupid if the Goblins did help or be REALLY kind to Harry. Harry and Goblins relationship should be just out of Business respect an nothing else. Maybe Harry could ask the Goblin if he Had a Trust Vault if his Father/James Potter takes his Money and gives it to Rodney. Harry takes a test and have the Goblins Swear under a Magical Contract to not reveal his secret. This is just an idea and people always seem to make the Goblibs to friendly around Harry in most Fanfictions I read.
I dea for Harry Wand:
Cedar Wood and Therstal Hair, but Harry could figure out how to use Spells with his Hands.
Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible.
| autumngold chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Very interesting beginning to your story! Poor Harry, he is going to have such a hard time because his main caregiver died. Will James even remember that he has another son?
Wonderful story so far! Can't wait for more!