|Reviews for Lost In Hopelessness|
| wolfspirit34 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I'm reviewing, because Italy said it'd make you happy. *hugs Italy*
I'm amazed on how each and everything is perfectly described in a way that allows me to actually imagine what going on. Romano was one of the last things I was expecting (he fit it all better than HRE anyways), and the characters were in character. Well, except for maybe Italy, but hey, he has an excuse. LOL
The perfect balance of angsty-ness and plot. Beautiful. But I'll give a little critism; your paragraphs were too short several times throughout the story, maybe being one or two sentences long. Lengthen them, and then the story will flow a little more smoothly. Other then that, I'm blown away by the sheer beauty of this.
*lets go of Italy* "I can already taste it." THAT PART KILLED ME
| Silverrain84 chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
uhhh this is so sad ;_; I think you got Italy emotions jest right of the situation he was in and, wrote it out so well. Im not one to cry vary often, but you got me on the brink of tears, good job!