Reviews for The Boss's Wife
Kimmyle chapter 7 . 1/15
So... I like the idea of your story and really wanted to read it, but I have to say the way you write your dialogue is a little too far from actual speaking things such as "oh, I just feel so protective of you I really don't know how that happened." doesn't really sound like something ppl would actually say. I am also missing a little detail in the action. You could lead towards the things that happen a little more in the first seven chapters you hinted towards a connection between the FBI and the Black's the Black's and the Denalis and you introduced James as a threat. It's a little much at once with not a lot of time in-between.
2caughtup chapter 24 . 12/25/2020
Hoping you finish! Merry Christmas
saintfudge chapter 24 . 12/15/2020
Wish there was more ..too many mob ficus left incomplete data ..I'm doing a covid clean out on my alerts and this is another to go ..thanks. For sharing did like the way this was going thanks for sharing have fun
Pattsy1994 chapter 23 . 12/6/2020
The Blacks and the Denali's aare thes to watch, but where is James.
Pattsy1994 chapter 22 . 12/6/2020
Great.
Pattsy1994 chapter 21 . 12/6/2020
So sad for losing Aro, l would have liked him dealt with Blacks first. Poor Bella, what happened to Charlies mother?
Pattsy1994 chapter 20 . 12/6/2020
phew, l need a shower now.
Pattsy1994 chapter 19 . 12/6/2020
Go Bella, show them who you are
Pattsy1994 chapter 18 . 12/6/2020
Great, l really, really like Char.
Pattsy1994 chapter 17 . 12/6/2020
Loving it.
Pattsy1994 chapter 16 . 12/6/2020
Thanks for a great chapter.-:)
Pattsy1994 chapter 15 . 12/6/2020
Well put Edward.
Pattsy1994 chapter 14 . 12/6/2020
Wow, it just gets better. Billy is in so much trouble, he killed Aro's son.
Pattsy1994 chapter 13 . 12/6/2020
I can't wait to know what they find out at bank.
Pattsy1994 chapter 12 . 12/6/2020
Maybe Charlie's parents were in the mob and that's why Charlie left them.
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