i get aro is a massive part of the crime organisation but u said beginning of the story that that the denalis were a big part and u cant wipe them away from actions of one thats not how it works in the unde4rground world u would be worried what they coiuld expose she would be eliminated they dont leave loose ends

...UPDATE. SOON..

Please update

Wow love it please wright more
You are amazing

Please update this story

What is Edward’s age?

I would have broken down into a fit of tears and sobbing.
I’m going to assume that she was in shock and that’s why she didn’t scream.

OH LOVE THISS STORY...PLEASE UPDATE

So... I like the idea of your story and really wanted to read it, but I have to say the way you write your dialogue is a little too far from actual speaking things such as "oh, I just feel so protective of you I really don't know how that happened." doesn't really sound like something ppl would actually say. I am also missing a little detail in the action. You could lead towards the things that happen a little more in the first seven chapters you hinted towards a connection between the FBI and the Black's the Black's and the Denalis and you introduced James as a threat. It's a little much at once with not a lot of time in-between.

Hoping you finish! Merry Christmas

Wish there was more ..too many mob ficus left incomplete data ..I'm doing a covid clean out on my alerts and this is another to go ..thanks. For sharing did like the way this was going thanks for sharing have fun

The Blacks and the Denali's aare thes to watch, but where is James.

Great.

So sad for losing Aro, l would have liked him dealt with Blacks first. Poor Bella, what happened to Charlies mother?

phew, l need a shower now.