|Reviews for Break Free|
| Never the End127 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Very much Cheshire. I enjoy Jade/Roy stories, and this was very well written. Good job, please update!
| Courtbcpsmskjjmd chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Not stupid! Very good. I think you got Cheshire just right. Thanks for the good read.
| Leena chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This was really well done! Not many people pull off good angst with Roy and Jade on
| RayWest1982 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Awww, poor Jade! I can imagine this being what happened during the time skip. Bad, Roy, bad.
| GingerBeef chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
AAAAHHHHH! I love this! Please continue, and no, I don't like it's OOCish. I think you captured Cheshire's soft side perfectly. She did, after all, keep the baby.
| PhoenixAgent003 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Honestly, pretty darn spot on, I'd say. Roy's a mess, as he should be, and the whole theme of being free fits Chesh like a glove.
The dynamics of their relationship seem fitting to me, mostly physical on the surface, but underneath there exist strong emotional ties as well.
I found it a touching twist when Chesire no longer wanted to kill, like being around an ex-cape and the burbs for so long had softened her just a little.
All in all, good read. I've always had a fixation for this pairing.
| Red X17 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Not bad, probably how it happened.
| MTBlack chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Really Cheshire to me. To be true, very angsty-like and sad. I loved it :) Really enjoyed reading this piece, seeing Roy slippuing towards... decadence? I really enjoy your descriptions of places, it really helps with the mood. Maybe the ending was not really, really, really Cheshire, but I can easily imagine her feeling sth for the little thing inside her. Maybe the hormones made her say that cheesy lovely thing? haha
And I particularly loved that he likes Queen. And in my mind he's also a huge fan of Bon Jovi, just because, haha.
I'm so glad you're back and that you've reposted this. The world does need more queens and more ChesRoy by your hand :)