Reviews for Break Free
babyvfan chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
The way I see it, there is no such thing as a stupid fanfic. A random? Sure. I've read too many of those. An odd one? Of course. Sad ones, both made to rip out heart or scratch the brain? Hell why not. But to me there's no such thing as a stupid fanfic. And this one definitely isn't stupid. It's an interesting twist on how their marriage life quickly went from hot to ice-cold with Roy digging himself deeper and deeper into the real Roy Harper situation
Never the End127 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Very much Cheshire. I enjoy Jade/Roy stories, and this was very well written. Good job, please update!
Cskjjmdrn chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Not stupid! Very good. I think you got Cheshire just right. Thanks for the good read.
Leena chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This was really well done! Not many people pull off good angst with Roy and Jade on
RayWest1982 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Awww, poor Jade! I can imagine this being what happened during the time skip. Bad, Roy, bad.
GingerBeef chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
AAAAHHHHH! I love this! Please continue, and no, I don't like it's OOCish. I think you captured Cheshire's soft side perfectly. She did, after all, keep the baby.
PhoenixAgent003 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Honestly, pretty darn spot on, I'd say. Roy's a mess, as he should be, and the whole theme of being free fits Chesh like a glove.

The dynamics of their relationship seem fitting to me, mostly physical on the surface, but underneath there exist strong emotional ties as well.

I found it a touching twist when Chesire no longer wanted to kill, like being around an ex-cape and the burbs for so long had softened her just a little.

All in all, good read. I've always had a fixation for this pairing.
Red X17 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Not bad, probably how it happened.
MTBlack chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Really Cheshire to me. To be true, very angsty-like and sad. I loved it :) Really enjoyed reading this piece, seeing Roy slippuing towards... decadence? I really enjoy your descriptions of places, it really helps with the mood. Maybe the ending was not really, really, really Cheshire, but I can easily imagine her feeling sth for the little thing inside her. Maybe the hormones made her say that cheesy lovely thing? haha
And I particularly loved that he likes Queen. And in my mind he's also a huge fan of Bon Jovi, just because, haha.
I'm so glad you're back and that you've reposted this. The world does need more queens and more ChesRoy by your hand :)