Reviews for The Curse of Destiny
soniya11 chapter 19 . 6/15/2016
plz continue
yana0808 chapter 19 . 12/10/2015
Will you keep writing this storie ?
Taylor9901 chapter 19 . 11/13/2015
Wish you would continue
Darkangel665 chapter 19 . 5/28/2015
I really like this story and I hope that you will continue to update. I also think that there can be so much more to this story and there can be more villains. For example you never mention Edwards fathers name how he is friends with Billy Black how and why Billy would tell Edwards father about the arrangement with him and Charlie, Also what happened to Edwards mom. I think there is a lot unknown about this story. There is really no backstory for any of the characters. You get a little bit of Edwards and Bella's but no one else. A Alice prov. of what she was thinking when Bella returned and her opinion of the kidnapper would have opened a window to how the people in town reacted to her kidnapping. You know small things like that. Anyways I really like your story and I can't wait to see how you continue it.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/26/2015
YOU SWITCB POVS RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF A CHAPTER! DON'T DO THAT!
twilightrules17 chapter 19 . 3/26/2015
Hi i love your story, it has me on the edge of my seat. Please Please Please update soon Please as it's been ages since you have update as i really want to know what will happen next
Guest chapter 19 . 3/9/2015
I really enjoyed this story
jk chapter 9 . 1/10/2015
Oh the horror! Not an arranged marriage that you'dont have to follow through with cause your 18 and can just walk out the door! Oh my ! Lol even if she wasn't 18 she wouldn't have to do it...god this story keeps getting dumber and dumber
jk chapter 8 . 1/10/2015
Soooo how's he keeping food fresh? Cooking? Where'd he get ice? I thought there as no electric? He inheritated the shack? Funny I thought he said he got some money...then {got} that shack...and Bella ran in circles for an hour? Is she that stupid? Where'd he get liquid pain meds? How are they being stored? Does Bella think that by not tasting her food makes her situation better? Ice but no hot water? Lol stuuuupid
heart crossed love chapter 19 . 12/31/2014
Please, Please, Please continue. This is an amazing story
melissamary55 chapter 19 . 12/25/2014
love it and cant wiat to read what will happen now will they be happy and what about Jacob and her parents what will they do
Guest chapter 19 . 12/24/2014
Yes please go on!
Guest chapter 19 . 12/23/2014
Please continue! !
marlane chapter 19 . 12/22/2014
yes please continue!
jay7795 chapter 19 . 12/22/2014
I think u have a great story but I think you should end it there n do a sequel... it just feels right ( to me)
a whole new . Story sorta like a second beginning .
I'd follow it
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