Reviews for Grave of the turtles
Psihopatul chapter 15 . 1/5/2014
Really well written though I keep wondering "floor" instead of "ground" haven't much read the ending texts you've written as I am very busy. I had to make some time from my busy schedule to finish reading your story and I am glad it wasn't the last chapter, I do hope to see updates soon. I'm not really what should I write more to this review as it's missing something. Oh well maybe next time. Good hunting!
InuYashaOuranKyoFan chapter 14 . 10/28/2013
Did you die?
Red chapter 15 . 8/2/2013

I thought I was going to suffer heart attack.
I like the sudden turnabout. It made me feels. I like feels.
It's going to end up happily ever after right?
It just isn't "K-ON!y" If it ends up without them being together.
It's good although there were a few typos
It's hard to find a good fan-fiction which actually lasts.
Sam Hayne chapter 15 . 6/26/2013
Well, not every misfortune is because pf Yui...she helped somehow.
... that spoiler...
Great to know I can help you for a bit
With that skill in writing, unis are just a breeze to you!
Heheh, If I make an account somehow, I'll really tell you! :)
Yukina-Tenma chapter 15 . 6/25/2013
Hey, a new chapter!

(Reviewer mode)
Though I'm pleased to read a new chapter, I never expected the following events to happen,
Azunyan died...At the chapter before this, it kinda led me to thinking both of them died, but what I dunno is how Azusa managed to save Yui. She is amazing!
Yui humming "Tenshi ni Fureta Yo!" added a bit more depression to it, which complemented the short but important incident well. I guess Azusa's death greatly affected them join it with Mugi currently lost. Azusa was the one who voluntarily came out of the shelter For her Senpais, it's sad that she parted with them earlier than expected...
This kinda made me want to cry after remembering the hardships they've shared while trying to survive while keeping each other company. And suddenly, one wrong move led to an accident.

Ritsu's leader instincts were acting u, it's for the other member's sake so it's unavoidable to think of it that way.

This is a really heavy chapter, short but really makes sense
. will you bring Azusa back!? O.O
I really wanna know!
Woah, so this isn't the toughest trials for them!? The suspense is killing me now!
There will still be more darker chaps than this...That's amazing! How do you even think of this!? *bows to you*
If it's nearing the end, I'll be waiting for the chapters!
Well at least they get momentary happiness,
but if you say they will somehow have a good ending...How will you pull that off?
Heheh, short chaps are fine

Update anytime!
InuYashaOuranKyoFan chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
EEEH!? EEEEEEEHHH!? EEEEEEEHHH!? *throws keyboard at wall* EEEEEEEEEEHHH!? EEEEEEEEEEHHH!? *shoots computer with a shotgun* EEEEEEEEHHHHHHHH!?
NodokaManabeFan chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
I understand that you can't put Nodoka in at this time. Thanks for the Epilogue thing though!

Maybe we could put Jun Suzuki and Ui Hirasawa and Nodoka Manabe in it! And it would be like 'GROUP HUG!' Great two chapters by the way! I'm excited for the next chapters! Can't wait! I don't want this to end!

Also, the title is very misleading. I was thinking about this last night, how does Grave of the Turtles fit in that well? I thought, 'Hey, I got a better idea!'

So her is my idea..

We Will Find The Way Home

I think it fits in perfectly! Thanks! :)
Aiiriin chapter 15 . 6/24/2013
Yeah, I'm the Mirajane part, and my younger sister is the Erza part.
WTH, why did you kill Azusa?!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/20/2013
Aiiriin chapter 13 . 6/18/2013
Great job, Yui...
Aiiriin chapter 12 . 6/18/2013
When I read this, it really makes think wars, like the one that is going on right now.
Aiiriin chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
Poor Mio-chan!
Aiiriin chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
I'm really worried now.
Aiiriin chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
I hate all of the soldiers, even that Akemi...
Aiiriin chapter 7 . 6/18/2013
What in the world is Mugi thinking!?
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