|Reviews for One Shady Character: The Story of A in Three and a Half Weeks|
| louise84 chapter 1 . 3/4
Hi can you tell me where I can find book 1 I didn't get to finish reading it! I would like to finish it before starting this new story, I love the story so far!
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/26
where did you post book one? i loved the story and read it twice. where can i download it from?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23
Lulu: i am trying to find the first Shady Character book so i can reread it before starting book 2. I can't find it on fanfiction. Was it moved to another location? Jean
| Jeangb chapter 5 . 2/24
Where has book 1 gone? I'd like to look back on previous chapters to refresh my memory as to what is going on.
Enjoyed the chapter, but I think Christian is making Ana his submissive by stealth. She needs to be calling on her inner goddess for some guts to say NO for once. Please don't be offended, this is your story, and i wouldn't read it if i weren't enjoying it
| truefeather77 chapter 23 . 2/21
Okay, I guess I'll never understand this. But at least I can finally agree with Ana on a couple of points: first it is mean, and he is mean; second, why does he want to do this?
I thought, according to the PR the cult puts out, that this was all supposed to be about increasing the feeling of intimacy with your partner. This doesn't feel intimate all.
For instance, why is it "a gift" to him, to get to do something that's very painful to her, that she doesn't really want to do? Her enjoyment comes from what he's doing as a distraction – he has to make her think about something else in order for her to stand it, or to experience any climax of her own.
I don't see how he treats her any differently from his subs. Her personality is submerged, and he becomes more confident in his bullying.
Your writing is powerful and the subject is fascinating – I'm still trying to figure out if he is different from Aziz, because right now it seems different more in degree than in kind.
| truefeather77 chapter 20 . 2/21
I was reading three and half weeks, and it disappeared. Or at least I think I was. Anyway, I tried to find it on smash words and it didn't have it. Is there somewhere I can find it? I'd like to finish reading it.
I keep finding chapters that seem further along, so I'm getting confused – and I don't want to spoil the story, I want to read it in order. Where do I start?
| purpleholden235 chapter 5 . 2/23
Love what happening, but can't not admit to being a little disappointed by the removal of the 1st Book. At least a review of what had previously happened would have been better as like many I suppose may find the first few chapters at least confusing with the references to previous characters that we can no longer refer too, but I look forward to where you are going to take this all the same, as I know how great you are at this
| Annette 101660 chapter 5 . 2/22
Love, love, love the story. But what happened to the your original story that took us up to this point? I believe I had read it all, but others may want to so they can understand this story. Ohhh and the "Clit" jewelry was very interesting. Just saying! ;)
| HBKekeni chapter 1 . 2/22
What happened to the first part of the story? Can you please re-load so I can catch up of all the chapters I missed before commencing book 2. Thanks.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Dang. Just my thought it was falling in love with you – really sure that I got where you were going with the story, and it would be an exciting ride, the story disappeared! Is it posted somewhere else?
| truefeather77 chapter 3 . 2/19
Why did Ana feel guilty that Christian looked sad? Because she's been brainwashed and broken. That was his goal. And because he's a master manipulator.
"Sexual evolution?" Becoming someone's chew toy is evolving? They don't have to eviscerate each other, I just want to see an Ana who is not fooled by Christian's verbal shell game.
(BTW - what's Christian's evolution? From manipulative bully to slightly less manipulative bully?)
And FYI, people read the books because the last one was called 50 Shades Freed, as in he was freed – his life was no longer completely controlled and defined by a pimp and a pedophile.
| truefeather77 chapter 2 . 2/19
Euchh! What I hate about BDSM, Christian Grey style, is the constant twisting and manipulation of words, the insults to her intelligence with every breath. He doesn't listen to a thing she says, twists what she said, and then comes back with a patronizing condescending response. Please tell me that others of my gender are not actually falling for bullcrap like this.
If he could just once come out and say, " I am a goddamn bully. I like beating up on people who are smaller than me in order to punish someone who's been dead for two and half decades. Also, I don't have the courage to think for myself, so I will forever regulate my life according to the things I was taught by a pimp and a pedophile." Then maybe I could at least respect him. He's lose points for being a common bully and abuser, but at least he'd gain a few for honesty.
| truefeather77 chapter 1 . 2/19
I don't know where the first seven chapters or so of this are, but I'm sort of lost. So as it stands, coming into this new – I think she's out of her mind. Just once, just once I'd like to see an Anastasia who isn't a bimbo. She'd have to be an idiot to do this, and from what I can infer from the context, he's doesn't have a legal leg to stand on.
| Dreamcatcher51 chapter 23 . 2/19
IS IT HOT AND STEAMY HERE, OR IS IT JUST ME? Dayummm, Christian is one SEXY assed beast! I don't think it's possible for him to be any more DELICIOUS than he already is! He's alway doing something unexpected to blow our minds! He and Ana are so HOT together. Ana definitely has a TIGER by the tail; no pun intended ;)) But she can sure hang with him!
| mrskoz chapter 21 . 2/19
I would LOVE to have a coupon - so I can get a copy for my e-reader. Couldn't figure out how to get the other one you mentioned - but then, I didn't know when that was posted. I just found your story again - I'm not very computer-conversant! - so hope it isn't too late. Would love to re-read it on my Kindle.
Thank you! If this doesn't work, best of luck with your publishing endeavors.