|Reviews for Vitiate|
| bwineylion chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
Yay tentacle rape! Why is it that so few males get this treatment and so many females do? Anyways, the plot is vey interesting and original. I just hope Ryou can get a new finger from Zorc, it makes me feel so bad for him.
| Cliscia chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
asldfj I'm a bit at loss for constructive words, again. I'm just very excited at the whole prospect of this, and can't wait to see where it goes. Zorc has completely replaced Bakura in Ryou's mind. What a chilling thought.
| Cliscia chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
Ah, I was going to write a lot about the ideas and themes that you touched on in this chapter, but now I'm just too excited and have to hit next. Goddamn, that sexual imagery.
| Cliscia chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
I forgot to mention earlier that I liked how disorganized and dazed Ryou was when he regained control of his body. It was really easy to feel how flustered he was , and how much time had passed from just small things that were different over the course of days.
I like how Ryou sees the Tome as an actual legitimate solution to getting rid of Bakura. Whether it's due to his affinity of the occult, or if he's just so desperate that he's grasping at straws. If anyone else saw this book they'd brush it off as simple folly. Ryou reads it and actually decides to follow it. He actually cuts off a finger because of a book he found in his room. Poor Ryou, you've fallen so far.
| Cliscia chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Interesting how Bakura has Ryou sculpt the miniature. Even if he were to take over Ryou's body, he still wouldn't be as artistically talented. So he makes Ryou do it instead. And it DOESN'T look as good when he does take over haha. Interesting...
Oh, Ryou owns the Millennium Tome? Also pretty intriguing...
| 999 the 9th chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
So is Zorc at full power or is some of his power still sealed?
| Bokmal14 chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
I will review- but not because of your threats. I doubt you can feed me to Zork when I'm in another country :D
But I find this plot and writing to my liking (rhyme :D) and I am looking forward to seeing more of this different-than-usual fan fiction.
It is a long time ago I found something truly original on this site- this is one of the ones I consider truly new.
| Yami-HikariAkira chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
Please- Please- Pleaseeeee continue thisssss! I get chills running down my spine when ever I read this! I love chapter 4 the best because to the tentacle porn heheh...Love this story! Please continue! ZorcXRyou forever ;3
| littlebrokenwing chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
Can't sign in from my phone! Grr! But I had to post a review! This is so twisted and creepy yet so gripping and amazing. The writing is amazing, the two of you work amazingly together as writers, impressive work. I cannot wait for the next chapter...
| Little.Broken.Wings chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
ah god damn I tried to post a review earlier from my phone but it doesn't seem to have gone through. Let's try this again. I love this. You work amazingly as a team, the writing is constantly gripping, descriptive, and entertainment. You just keep making this fun to read, and so creepy and dark, I actually shuddered a little at one point. I love this so much, I cannot wait for an update.
| SangNoire chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
Why, hello there, lovelies! :D
First of: WHY THE HELL ISN'T THERE MORE OF THIS ON THE INTERNET.
Second of: Oh. My. Friggin. Ra. This like already made my morning. I was waking up, it was raining cats and dogs and I actually HAD to get out of bed... and then I saw there was a new chapter...
And by Ra you didn't fail me.
I was like sitting on the edge of my seat and read through it and I would have been giggling sadistically if I hadn't been sitting in a bus xD I REALLY love this fanfiction. I have no idea how far you will take this. But I don't really care also. Keep up the good work, I really enjoy to read it.
So far, I'd say, I always wanted to actually see a fanfiction conceived like this, but due to work and university I wasn't able to write it myself. I am sure though, you will bring it out far better, than I would have been, actually you do it already ;D
Have a nice day both of you and if you can, bring out the update asap, before I bite off my fingers with my fingernails xD
Love you both! *gives you cookies*
| CryingMarionette chapter 3 . 4/16/2013
Yay, Easter eggs! It will be the first one I have received.. though it's probably bad by now, do internet eggs go rotten? Any ways I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed earlier, you two deserve all the support!
I'm really surprised at the lack of reviews, the work you do is simply amazing and you need to be reminded on how awesome y'all are.
I don't even know how to describe my reaction to reading this, mostly sad, disgust, and fear - but that isn't a bad thing! I just had to feel bad for my sweet Ryou, he was getting so brave, too, then IT had him! Ew, and just the thought of smelly "goop" made me shiver, I could just imagine it twisting and morphing into new shapes, gross.
Simply put, I love it.. I'm pretty morbid and this is right up my ally, lol.
"That figure was clearly a pale, slim humanoid shape, barely visible amongst the accumulated steam" - Who knew Bakura had such hobbies? Wouldn't put it past him ;)
I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
| SangNoire chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
*stares at the chapter for a while* I will be unable to shower for weeks. *trembles*
Oh my god. I was interested in this story, but I didn't know what exactly to review until now... this. IS... ... HORRIBLY ENTERTAINING.
There I said it. I love this story. I hope you will get more reviews... FIVE?! I mean... gawd. People.
Can be that I am just a sick sardistic girl being into this stuff... but... the things you did here... you did damn well! XD I like how Ryou reacts on the ritual "failing", how he is not that shy and yielding under the spirit... ones sees he REALLY wants to fight, but deems his chances to be relatively slim...
And Zork just... I don't know what I should call it... AMBUSHING him from THROUGH his soulroom door and then... excuse me, this HIGHLY entertaining peeking through the shower glass like this whole situation was a sick parody of... actual voyeuring... *chuckles*
I AM totally into him. xD
And holy cricket I love and can imagine ANY description in this so well!
Oh god... I just find this SO entertaining. Please keep it up... I really want to read more of this! :3 Can't wait for more.
| CryingMarionette chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
I think you did an amazing job in expressing the many emotions Ryou went through in such a short amount of time, without rambling too much about it, the transition from weak to anger and then his calm desperation was brilliantly done.
The fact that Ryou is so calculating while finding substitutes and even cutting off his own finger was entrancing, even more so for the fact that he's not sure that it will work but does it because he's willing to go that far just for some off chance. It is a strong side we don't get to see in Ryou often and I wish it was.
Also, I find that part with Bakura counting his fingers oddly hilarious.. " Now, that begged an important question; where the fuck was the tenth one?" Was the best line, hands down.
It's dark, it's gory, it's awesome. I can't wait for you two to release the next chapter :)
| Little.Broken.Wings chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
HOT DAMN. I am LOVING this, I actually winced when Ryou cut his finger... ouch. Aha I cannot wait to see where this goes. The writing is smooth, and interesting, constantly keeping your attention and the plot is perfectly paced so far not rushed but not so slow that I'd lose interest.
Perfect, in my opinion, I hope it remains at this awesome level.