Reviews for Legally Mine
Jiminy chapter 1 . 1/27
The first paragraph is chock full of errors and grade school mistakes. It's disheartening at best. I hope that in the time since you've written this that you have improved even slightly. You don't even understand verb tense or the difference in plural vs singular nouns. You have a peculiar love for ellipses and it makes for a difficult read. It's basically a failure overall.
Jussanother Otaku chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
Holy shite! That was friggin just amazing! You are one talented writer!
Uchiha brothers lover chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Bravo! Wonderful story. I'm so glad Sasuke came into Itachi's life.
anon chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
you hava a good idea. i like it.
Silvermist001 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I liked this fic. It was awesome.
Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I cant help but notice the lack of lube and the use of a condom but other than that i pretty much enjoy this story. Would love to read more about this two
Kiraramichealis chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
That story was amazing. It was so hot! I loved the way you explained every detail. And how you included Neji in the story. It was perfect! Good job!
illusionneverchangedx chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
That was cute and perfect and hot! I loved it! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
333 OMG THAT WAS SOO LONG! AND AWESOME! Yeah, LOVE Neji too!
Zero176085 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
That was so hot!
lv90047 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
This was so sexy! I loved the connection you created with the two. It was postively radiating with awesomeness!
I loved this story. You have a lovely writing style that's interesting to dig into. I hope one day I can do that with my stories. I hope you write more soon. This was excellent! 5 stars!
Lol. Happy Valentine's Day to you as well. :)