Reviews for More Than Duty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just found your story and finished it within 2 days! I couldn’t stop reading it. Excellent writing with very believable character traits. I hope you are able to contribute writing this fic :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I absolutely love your story. Just read it entirely and I cannot believe I didn’t know it existed before. I really like how you tackle with issues such as Pamuk, Carlisle and fake Patrick. The way in which you write and incorporate Lizzie into the story. I love seeing this more maternal side of Mary and how she makes an effort to get along with Edith. I think Matthew’s reaction was very truthful, he had been lied to and felt betrayed; particularly after everything he did to make sure Mary was happy. I read you mentioned that some troll had made mean comments; and I am happy you ignored them and just continue with this lovely story. I am 100% sure I will come back and re-read a couple of times. I’m hopeful you’ll be able to update at one point but even if you don’t I’ll just pretend that Mary had a boy and they were really happy. After a bit of jealousy from Lizzie regarding Matthew - I love how she didn’t want to share him and how she grew to love him so much. This story is truly wonderful, thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! i read it whole several times already and I will for sure reread it again. It is one of my most favourite ones in this fandom. I love your version of the charactersthey seem so very true to original despite the different path their lives took. I love how authentic Lizzie is as a child character. I was really impressed how you solved Carlisle and Patrick problems by using legal knowledgeI really wonder why they didn't do it on the show, your solution was so much better and realistic. I know that it's been 7 years since your last update, so you won't most likely go back to this story, but if you ever will I will most gladly read it! |
![]() ![]() The amount of spelling and grammatical errors in this is shocking and takes away from the story a bit. Nonetheless I am still enjoying the story - it’s interesting to imagine a perspective where Matthew becomes earl so early on and there aren’t completely calm seas. |
![]() ![]() I just discovered this story, and I love it! I do hope you continue it! It is excellently written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you will one day carry on with this story |
![]() ![]() I have enjoyed your 50 chapters of this story and am very sorry you never finished it. The first 10 or so chapters were especially compelling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please update this story! I absolutly love it! I have dine nithung but read this story today |
![]() ![]() Dear writer, I do hope you will continue and finish this story at some point. It is a nice AU escape for those of us who stopped watching after they killed Matthew off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh...I think I truly despise Carlisle. But I'm very pleased that Matthew is getting some extra time at home. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would just like to say that I really, really don't like Carlisle. He claimed in the show that he loved Mary, but no man who truly loved would use blackmail and treat the woman he loves the way that Carlisle treated Mary. |
![]() ![]() Please continue writing! I can't wait to read more and am anxious to see how it ends :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has been intriguing. I need to know how it ends. Will Mary's baby be a boy or a girl? Will Matthew remain paralyzed? I like how you dealt with Sir Richard and Patrick's claim. Please keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed reading this story! I hope you'll honor us with an update. Thank you for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my fav story about Mary and Mathew please finish it 20170519 |