|Reviews for Eye of the Storm|
| a DUMB girl WITH a COMPUTER chapter 1 . 2/20
I will not cry! Out of respect for Harry, I will not cry! QAQ
| Majix.Trixx chapter 1 . 2/18
I just need to say that your work is absolutely breathtaking n every single way imaginable. I've read your work before. I enjoyed Freefall immensely, along withIn Somno Veritas (brilliantly excellent work by the way), but this is something completely different.
The complex metaphors that you chase throughout your work are phenomenal in their exquisite nature. They're beautifully structured, and so in-depth with the characters. It left me exceedingly satisfied.
I'm not usually one for stories that don't have at least a mildly happy(ish?) endings, but I can't imagine this being any different. It's a beautiful piece, something that you should be immeasurably proud of.
Also, This has nothing to do with the story, but once I realized you wrote Freefall, I went in search of your other work, and realized with a chuckle that you co-wrote a HP/LV story with the exact same title/pairing as mine called The Final Horcrux.
| Mr. Ochinchin Head chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I missread 'Potter is a tornado' with 'Potter is a tomato'
| LeMasque31 chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
I second whoever said that you have managed to write poetry as prose. This is poetry, and it is ineffably beautiful - exquisite, rather. And everything that is not said makes it all the more poignant.
| BabblingSquirrel chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Wow! This was breathtakingly beautiful! How much - and how little at the same time - can be said in a thousand words! How do you manage to make everything you describe so raw and vivid? It's like I can see and feel it all! And no wonder it is beautiful - your language is beautiful after all :) By the way, I love your brackets - in In Somno Veritas too. They emphasize the real feel of the story and here they also make the wonderful interconnection between the opening scene and the final one - I just love them :) And this story. It was so...perfectly...hopeless.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
i love this so much
all those metaphors... they are so wonderful
| Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
T_T *howls in anguish*
| mabidiso chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Wish Harry holding him could have been the end of it. So gorgeous. Bet Voldie will never feel that vital, that essence of magic and wildness and life so close to him again. After this, it all will fade to dull, dense and muffled drudgery.
| Wise-wren-owl chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
My God... This story is unbelievable. I love your mind so much right now.
| Voldefolie chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
| smilingcrescent chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Beautiful! I adored your descriptions. Beautiful, poetic, tragic. Lovely.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Oh I was crying at the end! Great job!
| Death'sSymphony chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Why kill him, Tom?
Tom just took obsession to a whole new level.
You see, I always thought that if my beloved's going to die. Might as well be by my hands. Then I'll follow soon after. VERY soon after. Because having someone else take you love's life away is much more harder to bear. No? Don't mind me. I'm rambling. Something just entered my mind. -_-
| Insanely-Yours96 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Just. . . Wow.
| Q3APo chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
hiks... how could he kill harry? he loces him.
beautiful story. still, it so sad.