|Reviews for Heart|
| Bad-Wolf chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Damn. Just damn...
You're extremely skilled at writing Alice/Bumby, in all of it's twisted, possessive, depraved glory, and for the love of all things American McGee, please keep writing that...
But could you slip in the odd Bumby/Lizzie fic too? 'Cause this made my day, if not my entire week.
Brillant piece, just flippin' brilliant.
| ngoc.c.pham chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
I love how twisted your stories are!
I really wished that the game could have given Bumby more screen time and we could have seen him as the kind doctor and as the cruel child-pimp.
Hope to see more from you again!
| Silent Songstress Sorceress chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
It's so smoothly and fantastically written.
| nikkilittle chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Thank God there was no sex scene or this would have been considered child p*o*r*n*o*g*r*a*p*h*y in the United States. Suggestion to author. Just don't do Bumby/Elizabeth. You're skating on the edge of stuff that can land you in jail. Google "Karen Fletcher obscenity case" for details of what you're playing with.
| Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
omg I freakin' loved this. I can totally see Bumby doing something like that, AND putting that necklace on her when he killed her as if to say "haha I won".
| Rhaella Valysar chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Wow! Definitely a very disturbing end, went out with a boom! I instantly imagined Dr. Bumby placing the necklace on Elizabeth's neck before setting the house on fire - is it weird to imagine that scene? O.o
Love it! Again, it sounds just like the real Angus and the real Elizabeth. Very original and suitable for the occasion!
Happy Valentine's Day!
| pumpkin moose chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
I honestly didn't expect such a sharp turn at the end; it left me gaping. But I love the last line. 3