|Reviews for On the Line|
| Kkornelia chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Love it! Cant believe just found this now.
| P. Cythera chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I liked it, very cute :) I don't like depressing endings so I'm glad you wrote this one instead.
| Royal Dee chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Awww. So sweet. Are you writing from experience, because it seems to me like you are.
I've actually read an A/C fic that features two endings. One chapter for each ending. So it probably wouldn't be wrong for you to post the other end... although, if it's tragic... /3 But the world needs more nicely written A/C fics, so I'll take them as they come.
Thanks for sharing.
| stubbornheroine chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
cute and sweet :)
I like the development from Kira's best friend to Athrun to fiance. hehe
got to love the dense Cagalli ;p
"I feel like purposely not locking it just to spite you. You know what? I'm not going to lock the door tonight. Ha! Can't do anything about it, hm?"- really funny.
lots of scenes made me smile like how she secretly liked the flowers & her attempt at cooking
I thought that Athrun would be actually waiting for her at his home, as a surprise. LOL
| rynne chan chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
.., hehe.., nice story.., at first i thought that athrun and cagalli broke up.., or worse athrun died.., that's why she was alone., and then when he called her.., i realized that i was wrong.., lol.., and then i thought that athrun was just kidding when he said that he wasn't able to come back on valentine's and that he was actually waiting for her in his place.., and again, i was wrong..,
.., oh yeah.., i wanna read the other ending that you wrote...
| lezala chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I let a sigh relief when he was just overseas.. fiuh..
I like their last time to celebrated the Valentine day. LOL XD *kyaaa*
Another great fic, really hope you'll make another Asucaga fic again...soon. :)
Thanks for sharing this.
Happy Valentine day.
| littlemsstrawberry chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
| popcaga chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
i love it...
| nom de plumee chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Long AN is fine with me :'3 It's like giving us chance to know the author better :Dv
Anyway. It's not only turned out okay, but also sweet.
You know, at first I thought that Athrun were no longer there (and I got sadness over me). When it's appeared that he's only on the other place, I let out a huge breath! However I feel bit disappointed that they are separated many miles (u.u) Well, hey, it's really fortunate that my first guess is wrong :Dv
Is it only me who feels Athrun's like a mother hen? O.o
Btw, I really thank you for this contribution :) Without you and everyone else, this event wouldnt be like now :D
Keep writing, ne! :3
| Nemui Neko-cchi chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
I stood an awe...
(we had the same 'consideration' although you were mooooooorrrrreeee moooreee beettteeerrr and experienceeeee than me)
gotta click fave.
Happy Vals day. Thanks :D
| Pypy chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Cool!:) Keep writing. I always look forward to seeing your stories! XD
HAPPY VALENTINE! :)