|Reviews for Bumps in the Night|
| crazy reader 241 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
roserade and glaceon are pretty smart
| The Pelican chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
(OMG. KROO. HOW TYPICAL OF YOU... THAT REEKS 'YOU' ALL OVER)
I bet you know who this is.
I'm waaaaay too lazy to log on-haven't been on for a while.
My favorite bit: Smack!
ahah, that amused me more than it probably should.
Anyways, great job I loved it. I haven't read FF under this section in a long time, and I'm glad that it was something great.
Everything seems fine, maybe a bit OOC (like you said) and the dialogue is a bit off. Msg me if you want help. My grammar book and I would love to be of assistance. xD
And the thoughts are just italicized... no single quotes... nothing. Just italicized will do
that took a lot of work to type out too... haven't reviewed anything in mooonths...
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
love how your May has developed equally confident answers to Drew's banter. xD
| Tiger Priestess chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Haha, May hearing voices...Drew's room being haunted...I was laughing so hard!
I was expecting Harley and/or Solidad to make an unexpected appearance and being the one behind the Kroo's, but Roserade and Glaceon work too!
Also loved Drew and May's relationship in this.
| L.X.ie chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Oh those sneaky little pokemon! :3
| BlueBlackFantasy chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Thank you so much for the Valentine Oneshot! There weren't as many as I hoped. D: But your story made up for it, it was really good! :3 Happy Valentine's Day!
| TheDisguisedFairy chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Kroo is your second favorite word? Did you make it up or does it actually have a definition? Ah, well. I absolutely loved this! Good job!
| A-Gallade chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Oh, man. I loved that! Whether or not May and Drew were OOC doesn't matter. You potrayed them so well in this and I loved their interactions so much, and I agree with their playful sides coming out as they aged. I do especially like May as she recites the messages sent by the fangirls with little care and little jealousy in their direction, almost as if she knew they weren't much of a threat to her XD
Funny and adorable )
| Lunation chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! IT WAS AMAZING
| TheRealContestshippingPrincess chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
This was really cute! I liked it! :) great job! And you know I imagine them playful towards each other too when they're older. More obvious flirting you know lol. Great job I liked it!