Reviews for Valentine's and Ice Cream
kiiroi yumetobu chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Ishida describing an icecream as 'indifferent' was just absolutely perfect. I was laughing so hard! Although the Valentine's Day formula is used so often, you took a direction that really freshened it up and allowed your style to come through. Despite a few grammatical errors, you did a good job with character portrayal. I see your sentences and word choices as measured and very effective; for example, "Keigo's energetic voice made its debut, an omen of another worthless attempt to hang out" (love this line!) I think it'd be really worthwhile if you kept exploring this element in your future fics!
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Awww cute, I loved it and awesome job
ichiishigirl chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
so cute! 3
Cherry Jade chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
So sweet and cute! Love it tons! Happy Valentine's Day!