Reviews for The Perfect Doll
xxPockyStraw21xx chapter 5 . 12/18/2013
I want DioxAya please! I LURV THEM AS A COUPLE and I ragequit on a story when I don't have my ships ;( THE SADNESS! I LOVE AYA X Dio!
xxPockyStraw21xx chapter 6 . 12/18/2013
Can you make Dio appear and dio and darnell have an affairy but please make aya with dio PLEASE
yukionnaMonetxX chapter 6 . 3/14/2013
Ey man You. Are. Awesome.! xD «3
I start to like Darnell, but Dio is still the cutest corpse ever! xD
AyaxDarnell... hmm I wouldn't mind about some moments, but I still like DioxAya more :D
UpDaTeSoOnPlEaSe! :DD
This story has such a great plot! (:
Novem927 chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
Ha ha, I guess Lilly does look like Snow White. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Alois-Bipolar-Blonde chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Oooh, nice! Can't wait for Domino to appear! I wonder if he's the young teenage boy hiding sadness deep within...
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!
yukionnaMonetxX chapter 5 . 2/26/2013
awww I love you too xD :3
Amazing chapter. I... kinda liked their little conversation :3
Poor Aya... actually I should feel sorry for the stabbed boy but for some reasons I feel
more sorry for Aya-Chan xD
I'm not good in making OC's but when it helps the story to go on, I'll try it :I
Name: Ayane
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Personality: friendly, noisy, sometimes kinda pesky
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Well hope that kinda... helped xD
Update soon, can't wait for more of Darnells and Ayas (kinda cute xD) conversations :3
Alois-Bipolar-Blonde chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
Awesome story. I was wondering if I could give a character?
Name: Domino
Age: 14
Gender: Male
(I'm not really sure what you mean by characteristic...)
Personality: Friendly, brave, rude sometimes, cheeky
Looks: Black, short scruffy hair with white streaks, silver eyes, slightly short for a 14 year old, pale skin, well-built,
Hope it helps.
Tenshi321 chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
Hi I just Want to say I love your story and keep going :)
Seventh Star chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
I really like the relationship, you've created between Maria and Aya, sweet in a creepy way. Can't wait for more
yukionnaMonetxX chapter 3 . 2/17/2013
Oh my... cliffy :3
... I already like Darnell! xD
"I-wanted-him-like-how-I-wanted-my-first-teddy-bear."
Well... is it weird that I think it's freakin' kawaii when she said that? xDD
Update soon please; this plot... and everything about this story is so amazing! :DD
Thxx so much for writing! :3
Eve chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Good!
yukionnaMonetxX chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
ZOMG *O*
this story is so freakin' awesome! :DD
I think they were totally in character the whole time :3
Maria-Chan... I still feel kinda sorry for her ;w;
Well, you are amazing q.q
UpDaTeSoOnPlEaSe «3 :D